A villanelle that morphed into a sort of sonnet.




Her Voice

Her voice (that voice!) compels our modest throng
to listen with our nerve and pulse, to heed
the breath and beat embodied in her song.

She doesn't falter. Not a note goes wrong.
She reads our secrets, knows just what we need;
gladly enthralled, our mute, attentive throng!

She snares and captures us, till we belong
to her and to the music. Hear her lead
our souls into the sanctum of the song.

From Gershwin tunes to '90s pop .... Among
news-blurt and noise-blare, rant and strident screed,
our hearts find haven in her sheltering song.

We plead as one, our meek infatuate throng,
to listen long to her unending song.





Poetry by Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2025-04-17 at 08:06

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nailed it! Well done.
2025-04-18


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
And very lyrical it is too. Well done. Blessings, Allen
2025-04-17


Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
so. you feel like someone very feeble while listening to this song
that's why it gives you the feeling that she holds your secrets
I've been in such mood already too!
2025-04-17