Last Breath

I step outside, it begins to rain.
I yell in agony, I scream in pain.
Alone in life, my heart in chains.
Each hour that passes, less time remains.

I hate this game, I never win.
My heart barely beats, please let me in.
Pretending not to cry, waiting for you to call.
Smiling behind the lie, trying not to fall.

The day turns to night, I start to pray.
Not wanting to sleep, I wish you would stay.
So quiet at night, it seems like death.
I finally realize, I'm taking my last breath.




Poetry by SomThinWikid
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Written on 2006-07-19 at 20:06

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Amanda K
wow. i like how words do flow here. so matched to the theme and showed balance and harmony.

keep it up,
bookmarked,
2006-11-28


Arti
Wow. This is so powerful. I love the rhythm and the flow of this one.
2006-07-20


Chuke
Lovely rimes, add on a bit of reggae composes and then you'll be rich :), A wonderful poem :)
2006-07-19


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
lovely text and so nice to see you posting young lady once again rgds
2006-07-19