The Elements- Fire

Burning bright, you give us light

Yet can fill our world with endless plight

Destructive and careless you can be

Yet help us function to a certain degree

Candles, cooking, and burning are few

Of the many things your wonder can do

Small and contained or out of control

Yet is the thing that burns in our soul



Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-08-17 at 01:09

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Janine>K
very well done...it set my heart on fire :-)
2006-08-17


penfold18
Imaginative, discriptive and to the point, well written.
2006-08-17


Aashish Thakur
this is good, but it could be better if you put more philosophical aspect of fire in to it...anyway good poem
2006-08-17