There wasn't as big as a turn out for this challenge, but still there is something that you will enjoy. : ) There were 9 entries.
KJC, Kathy LockHart, Arti
Then the male contributors:
Christian Lanciai, Liam(CB), Cr4Ky, Nepenthes, Coolaaron88
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By KJC
Oceans Connect Countries (Haiku) (for the Ocean Challenge)
Water connects hearts
Crashing Waves crumble mountains
Oceans of People
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By Kathy LockHart
Seaside Delights (Aaron's Ocean Challenge)
Emerald waters rush to shore
turbulently tossing abandoned shells,
scattering them across white sand,
impregnating the air with fishy smells.
Golden haired children and waves dance
together, playing a game of "Keep-Away."
Sand pails and shovels make castles
built by crouched cherubs delighted in play.
Mothers and fathers watch their young,
lathering sunblock across tender skin.
Aromatic scents of coconut
wafted softly among strangers and kin.
Tanned taut bodies of teens displayed
stroll along, ogling each other,
hoping that attraction unites
couples intrigued by one another.
The ocean and beach create unity
among creatures from sea to shore,
sating the senses with delights
ravenously consumed and wanting more.
The sand, the sea, the changing shore
in balance by creation's plan.
God's infinite wisdom prescribed
that all nature is molded by His hands.
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By Arti
Sunset by The Sea (Reposted for Aaron's Ocean challenge)
Sparkling wind-waves rising high
Expanse of endless, restless sea,
My soul with this timeless passion flies
Spring in my soul, set me free.
Expanse of endless restless sea
Dyed in sunset hues of red and gold
Hypnotized by this love so free
I watch a daily miracle unfold.
My soul with this timeless passion flies
Marriage of wind with water – for me –
Silhouetted ship-sails flowing silently by
Under Heaven's majestic canopy.
Spring in my soul, set me free,
From cares and tears that my life brings
Soothed ruffled feathers by nature's touch
My spirit takes flight on passion's wings...
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By Christian Lanciai
180. Sea of Love ( - in answer to Coolaaron's latest challenge)
It's all for you, my loved, all my sea of love
of endless care and generosity,
of all my life and its creativeness,
my whole production and all that I lived for,
all the beauty I have lived for, all my music above all.
Just take it, drown in it, protect it and enjoy it,
let my music's affluence inspire you
and match the generosity and full length of your gorgeous hair,
and be magnanimous, magnificent and magic
with the manifoldness of this sea that I bequeath you,
greater than the lands of all the earth and richer
with its endlessness of life and love
that man can never understand or fathom
except lovers of the same kind of dynamic bottomlessness
as creative freaks like you and me, both drowned in our abyss
of the ultimate perfection of the beauty of pure music
manufactured and created only out of the profoundest melody
of love that only can be found beyond the depths of all the oceans.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Liam(CB)
The Oceans symphony ( coolaarons challenge)
Clouds gathered in like an expectant audience
A hushed excitement, the air is charged
Waves caress the shore, like soft violins
Tempo rises, the show is about to start
A lightning stroke, the cymbals crash
Thunder roars as a roll of drums
Waves crash together, a crescendo
The ocean is playing her overture
Like flutes in tune the wind blows her song
And tambourines rattle as raindrops that fall
In perfect harmony the buoy-bell rings
The symphony of the sea begins
And high above sings a choir of gulls
Crashing waves on the rocks, their applause
The mist draws back to reveal the dawn
And the moon takes her final bows
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Tides of Time...( in repsonse to coolaarons challenge)
Remembering those sandcastles
How we laughed together
Trying to outshine the others
Basking in an never ending summer
Throwing driftwood into the waves
A race to come back to shore
Stupid things that meant so much
As we shared our adventures together
Watching the tide turn, then come in
The waves lapping onto our beach
Nibbling away at our castles of sand
Till every grain was gone
Sitting on a rock overlooking our beach
I can see us at play on the sands
The tide of time has taken you away
Alone with my memories of our ended summers
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By Cr4Ky
Call me (respond to Coolaaron88`s challenge)
Call me ocean breeze
i know it`s time
to sooth your mind
when you look for me
i`ll send you dancing
on my waves
Call me deep blue dream
i know you need me
to drown your tears
when you swim in me
i`ll cover you
from the hatred in the air
Call me free and wild
i`ll help you find yourself
while my waves are raging
and as you sail my shores
i`ll give you the time
To dream
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By Nepenthes
moments of murder
(with deference to t.s. eliot)
i am chilled
i am hollow
and i think about silence
... how does that go?
(i should have been a pair of shabby tentacles?)
when the seas are savage
i seem only to find the shadows of thought
and the moments of murder
(i should have been two ragged talons?)
children are crying for blankets
mothers are tending sleepless nights
and fathers are drowning at their desks...
how DOES that go?!
(i should be a couple of jagged feelers?)
but the silence is wriggling
the seas are empty
the claws have been pinned
(and i don't know how to scuttle)
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By Coolaaron88
Wave Motion
I remember that faithful day by the ocean
The waters touch filled with devotion
The setting sun over my head
Euphoric thoughts replacing my dread
Barefoot on the beach and yet I knew
Our connection would be forever true
The sea now the letter to your heart
The waves have been truly a piece of art
Salty seas have made me wonder
If our love was just a blunder
I broke your heart and now I see
My actions were vicious and caused you to flee
My last plee to you as the waves come in
Washing away my pain and my sin
Please come back to the place that felt so free
Our place of connection, the majestic sea
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-09-09 at 21:34
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Final Post for the challenge:"Waves from the ocean, please clense my soul."
First the female contributors:KJC, Kathy LockHart, Arti
Then the male contributors:
Christian Lanciai, Liam(CB), Cr4Ky, Nepenthes, Coolaaron88
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By KJC
Oceans Connect Countries (Haiku) (for the Ocean Challenge)
Water connects hearts
Crashing Waves crumble mountains
Oceans of People
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Kathy LockHart
Seaside Delights (Aaron's Ocean Challenge)
Emerald waters rush to shore
turbulently tossing abandoned shells,
scattering them across white sand,
impregnating the air with fishy smells.
Golden haired children and waves dance
together, playing a game of "Keep-Away."
Sand pails and shovels make castles
built by crouched cherubs delighted in play.
Mothers and fathers watch their young,
lathering sunblock across tender skin.
Aromatic scents of coconut
wafted softly among strangers and kin.
Tanned taut bodies of teens displayed
stroll along, ogling each other,
hoping that attraction unites
couples intrigued by one another.
The ocean and beach create unity
among creatures from sea to shore,
sating the senses with delights
ravenously consumed and wanting more.
The sand, the sea, the changing shore
in balance by creation's plan.
God's infinite wisdom prescribed
that all nature is molded by His hands.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Arti
Sunset by The Sea (Reposted for Aaron's Ocean challenge)
Sparkling wind-waves rising high
Expanse of endless, restless sea,
My soul with this timeless passion flies
Spring in my soul, set me free.
Expanse of endless restless sea
Dyed in sunset hues of red and gold
Hypnotized by this love so free
I watch a daily miracle unfold.
My soul with this timeless passion flies
Marriage of wind with water – for me –
Silhouetted ship-sails flowing silently by
Under Heaven's majestic canopy.
Spring in my soul, set me free,
From cares and tears that my life brings
Soothed ruffled feathers by nature's touch
My spirit takes flight on passion's wings...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Christian Lanciai
180. Sea of Love ( - in answer to Coolaaron's latest challenge)
It's all for you, my loved, all my sea of love
of endless care and generosity,
of all my life and its creativeness,
my whole production and all that I lived for,
all the beauty I have lived for, all my music above all.
Just take it, drown in it, protect it and enjoy it,
let my music's affluence inspire you
and match the generosity and full length of your gorgeous hair,
and be magnanimous, magnificent and magic
with the manifoldness of this sea that I bequeath you,
greater than the lands of all the earth and richer
with its endlessness of life and love
that man can never understand or fathom
except lovers of the same kind of dynamic bottomlessness
as creative freaks like you and me, both drowned in our abyss
of the ultimate perfection of the beauty of pure music
manufactured and created only out of the profoundest melody
of love that only can be found beyond the depths of all the oceans.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Liam(CB)
The Oceans symphony ( coolaarons challenge)
Clouds gathered in like an expectant audience
A hushed excitement, the air is charged
Waves caress the shore, like soft violins
Tempo rises, the show is about to start
A lightning stroke, the cymbals crash
Thunder roars as a roll of drums
Waves crash together, a crescendo
The ocean is playing her overture
Like flutes in tune the wind blows her song
And tambourines rattle as raindrops that fall
In perfect harmony the buoy-bell rings
The symphony of the sea begins
And high above sings a choir of gulls
Crashing waves on the rocks, their applause
The mist draws back to reveal the dawn
And the moon takes her final bows
~~~~~~~~~~
Tides of Time...( in repsonse to coolaarons challenge)
Remembering those sandcastles
How we laughed together
Trying to outshine the others
Basking in an never ending summer
Throwing driftwood into the waves
A race to come back to shore
Stupid things that meant so much
As we shared our adventures together
Watching the tide turn, then come in
The waves lapping onto our beach
Nibbling away at our castles of sand
Till every grain was gone
Sitting on a rock overlooking our beach
I can see us at play on the sands
The tide of time has taken you away
Alone with my memories of our ended summers
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Cr4Ky
Call me (respond to Coolaaron88`s challenge)
Call me ocean breeze
i know it`s time
to sooth your mind
when you look for me
i`ll send you dancing
on my waves
Call me deep blue dream
i know you need me
to drown your tears
when you swim in me
i`ll cover you
from the hatred in the air
Call me free and wild
i`ll help you find yourself
while my waves are raging
and as you sail my shores
i`ll give you the time
To dream
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Nepenthes
moments of murder
(with deference to t.s. eliot)
i am chilled
i am hollow
and i think about silence
... how does that go?
(i should have been a pair of shabby tentacles?)
when the seas are savage
i seem only to find the shadows of thought
and the moments of murder
(i should have been two ragged talons?)
children are crying for blankets
mothers are tending sleepless nights
and fathers are drowning at their desks...
how DOES that go?!
(i should be a couple of jagged feelers?)
but the silence is wriggling
the seas are empty
the claws have been pinned
(and i don't know how to scuttle)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By Coolaaron88
Wave Motion
I remember that faithful day by the ocean
The waters touch filled with devotion
The setting sun over my head
Euphoric thoughts replacing my dread
Barefoot on the beach and yet I knew
Our connection would be forever true
The sea now the letter to your heart
The waves have been truly a piece of art
Salty seas have made me wonder
If our love was just a blunder
I broke your heart and now I see
My actions were vicious and caused you to flee
My last plee to you as the waves come in
Washing away my pain and my sin
Please come back to the place that felt so free
Our place of connection, the majestic sea
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Poetry by Coolaaron88
Read 522 times
Written on 2006-09-09 at 21:34
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