This will be a elemental series


Valley of Fire ~Part 1~

As I walked through the valley of fire
I saw decisions plenty, maybe my desire
Burning flames
Brightly red
I see the sky furious with me
No help from god, or the northern sea
Time went by
Longing to find
Help to problems left to muliply
If no solace is found, I'd surely die



Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-10-06 at 03:29

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Emeka Chike Nwogu
A forceful voice. A strong and powerful poem.
I need to think about some of the things you wrote about. There surely must come help, my guy. Just relax.
2006-10-07


kayce
you got talent
2006-10-06


Zoya Zaidi
Powerful write Cool!
(((hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2006-10-06