Flair



How shall I relate to you, my love?
We stand too close to be at odds
and have too much in common
to have any reason for division,
and we understand each other far too well
for words to be of any service,
needed or at all be necessary.
We have everything, and yet we miss each other
since our souls are too united to allow our bodies to unite,
wherefore we have to keep some distance
not to risk our souls. And that's the secret
of our love, that is so envied, since it gives us
so much more than just the joy of mortal love.
That special character enhances and brings forth
the beauty of our souls and underlines it
in a spiritual development that has no limit,
which is marked by others but not understood by them,
which fills them with some envy which defies all definition.
Let them be confounded by their lack of understanding.
Deities should never mind the small talk of the mortals,
and in our love our level stands above the mortal speculation
making us like gods in our special kind of love
that stands forever beyond mortal recognition.




Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-13 at 10:41

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Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh my! Oh dear! What am I to say? All I can do is to just go on...

I wish I could have a blue-eyed soul like yours, but unfortunately it's brown-eyed...

Flattery intended...

Chris
2006-10-13


BlueyedSoul
You leave me speechless...your writing is as Tai said...genius....Easily you are my favorite writer on this bay. Flattery not intended.

~Blue
2006-10-13


Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
I admit 'Flair' is something of an understatement here, but it's intentional, since the containts are rather the opposite...

Thanks for the comment.
2006-10-13



I am not sure if Flair, really gives enough credit to this ethereal view on love Christian. It is a fine expression of the more enigmatic dimentions that loving can aspire to in life and after and deserves a higher ranking than flair presents. Panache is one step up, Genius is somewhere close to it's truth of expression. A must read indeed, smiling at you, Tai
2006-10-13