Some sweaty lines, four (4) Nepenthes' four line challenge



Running out of inspiration
turns you on in perspiration
and your stinking transpiration
adds to all that constipation.



Poetry by Christian Lanciai
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Written on 2006-10-16 at 13:07

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Zoya Zaidi
I love the last line!
lol...
2006-10-17


BlueyedSoul
sweaty can be a good thing...cute one.
~Blue
2006-10-16


Kathy Lockhart
This is great! Funny and true!
2006-10-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Christian this is so good well done rgds mike
2006-10-16



What a smelly rhyme this is Christian
Sounds like a typical perspiring man
Who need a little Adorisation can
And also, onstipation sollutian.lol

Thanks for sharing,

She only sweats when she's daring!

A FanTaiSee
2006-10-16


Cr4Ky
enjoyed this one;) nice!
2006-10-16