A response to Valerie's poem


5 Senses ~Aaron Style~

When I heard your music play
Things went from wrong to right
Hearing your perfect voice float on the air
Gives a new meaning to delight

When I first saw your face
My heart grew in size
When I saw that you loved me
I locked in on your eyes

When I inhaled your intoxicating perfume
Yes I was on a high
I lose all sense of direction
Whenever you walk by

When I first spoke the words
That would seal my fate
I felt a miracle happen
You are my perfect mate

At last I touch your skin
Soft as the feathers of birds
I start to see and wonder
If a touch is as soft as words




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-10-28 at 06:31

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Lorna
i think it's very 'cute', some of your lines are almost classics :)
2006-10-30


Valerie
You've out done mine aaron! nice job! i loved it!
^val^
2006-10-28



i really love this poem aaron. the third and fourth lines are my absolute favorite.
2006-10-28


Halloway
It's so much feelings in this poem. I really love it. It's so much love in it.
Well done :)
2006-10-28


Saga
I felt every sense with every word!!!
2006-10-28