Continuation of an old saying


United we Stand

United we stand

Divided we fall

United we prosper

Divided we crawl

United we learn

Divided we lose

Untied we shine

Divided we bruise

United we gain

Divided we recede

United we attain

Divided we mislead

United I know

That I will fly

Divided I lose my wings

And fall from the sky 

 





Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-12-02 at 00:46

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Emeka Chike Nwogu
This piece is true and straight to the point. When we are divided, we are headed to the ground. A wicked fall is sure.

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Saga
united we stand, yes divided we fall, together, we can stand tall. Great one Aaron!!!

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Daybreaker
I agree with the former speaker! It's a very good piece, and the four last lines especially!

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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought that this was a political thing about the US, untill i read the last 4 lines, and it was beautiful, i actually saw (well my minds image of you) fall from the sky after losing your wings, beautiful, i love the abrubt change, how did you mean this??? i love it

~Kiva

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