30) I Just Miss you

What does it mean to miss someone?
Is it the feeling that you are lost when he's not there.
Is the term that explains itself by tears?
What does it mean when you yearn for his touch?
Does it say that you feel cold and torn?
Or in need to hear some of his lovely words?
Who can define longing so long?
Who can tell how much this heart is waiting to hold!
Each breeze that dances through his hair,
Each vibration sent by his voice,
And each single smile that makes me feel home again.
Do days seem the same?
Do places smell of rain?
When he's not present,
I just want to embrace all the times at once,
In order to see his face and love him a bunch.
Honey when you are away,
I do always wonder how was my life before you shared my day.
Pray that you come soon
and water my flowers so they bloom.
Welcoming you eventually in every room.


I miss you,,,,,




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2006-12-09 at 06:37

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Teala
Very deep and thought-provoking..I have often wondered these things myself..I suppose absense does make the heart grow fonder..but it is horrible missing someone!
2007-01-07


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
"Pray that you come soon
and water my flowers so they bloom.
Welcoming you eventually in every room." - i love these lines, just captures the longing so beautifully... you write well amanda... i have longed for one in this way, and lucky for me he does all of that and so much more... you deserve the best for such a sweet heart you possess... lots of hugs from me *hugs* xx
2006-12-24


salem
oh this poem make suffering
coz it's deep
and so lovely
thanx amanda
huggxxxx
2006-12-10


seda
this poem touched my heart.

''Honey when you are away,
I do always wonder how was my life before you shared my day.
Pray that you come soon
and water my flowers so they bloom.
Welcoming you eventually in every room.
I miss you'' How wonderful verses, as if you have read my innermost thoughts :) I liked it so much, it shows how I feel for someone who I miss very bad

bookmarked***

love,
Seda
2006-12-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Amanda Panda

this is a lovely poem that aptly describes a feeling i reach at times

so deep so thought provoking what a really good text in my bookmarks right now

rgds Mickey Mouse
2006-12-09


Zoya Zaidi
'Who can define longing so long?'

No one but the one who has suffered...

'I just want to embrace all the times at onc'

And hold on fast to them and never let go...

This is sipmly beautiful Amanda!
Lovely!

*Bookedmarked*

(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-12-09