Critical moment when love is confessed.


81) My Love, Here's my Reply

I didn't know what to say,
When you confessed your love to me.
Should I have told you that I loved you;
Way before you uttered those words.

For honey when I first gathered with you,
My blood did rush and couldn't help,
But to have you my crush.

I followed my heart's beat
And discovered the most amazing man indeed.
Who made my eyes always open,
Even when I was asleep.
To witness the beauty of moments shared with you.
Feeling the soft touches of nights beside you.
I've never thought that life will be that kind,
Before meeting you my man.
Or I could have said plz read my reply through my eyes
Shaking lips,
Warmth of my hand,
And this fond kiss.




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-09-25 at 21:38

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amandeep
wow.beautiful poem must say..fantastic..
i wrote her fantastic and liked it very mush..becuase it is/was happening to me in these days..i was little bit confused to say...her...and my behavior was totally different in that days..
i would always think about her
while going somewhere..or everytime..
and finally i told her.....heheheheh
but ....just waiting till now.....i want the answer "NO" i think she must say these words...so that i can get out of this...i was not like this..i was totally different from now....

but nice poem..great..

keep writing we wait for ur poems

regards
Aman
2008-04-25


martin pande
I love your imagery, quite good use of words, keep it up.
2007-09-27


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
a heart genuinely speaks out! this is lovely... really captures that very moment... as you say, a critical one for sure, and the most exhilarating at the same time... your words get all of that through... i enjoyed this a lot, thanks :) *hugs* xx
2007-09-26


Will
Expressive & Fine Write.

Sometimes Love can be that overwhelming...

Great Write!!!
2007-09-25