Thinking of you


83) You May

you may be just a dot in the world
but for me you are a sentence and a whole book
you can be a neglected wave in the deep sea
but for me you are the ocean and my cup of tea
and your love is my garden
that I water everyday with love and care
and if am present or away be sure will always remain
to watch you and gurad your heart
from every ache and pain
keeping your mind in my safe
embracing your soul as a grain




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-11-18 at 15:31

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Will
Nicely Written....

CONGRATS Dear Amanda..
2007-11-19


Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
It's a beautiful understanding of what LOVE is all about. and it is UNCONDITIONAL. Although it's imperfect but, Thats the beauty of it.
So, to quote your words:

"You may be just a dot in the world
but for me you are a sentence and a whole book.
You can be a neglected wave in the deep sea
but for me you are the ocean and my cup of tea"

Beautifully woven comparison!
2007-11-18