rather sad, I'm afraid


Nostalgia – for Kathy's best age challenge



Why could not that divine and golden age and moment
stay and just remain, forever going on?
It was the age of friendship, the most perfect love
of innocence, when nothing was required
and no knowledge was at hand nor needed,
when we simply loved and were together
naturally without affectations or pretensions
long before the first released erection made us blush
and turn into ourselves
to never be completely free again.
At school there was a whole world to discover,
chart, reveal and wonder at
of knowledge, botany, geography and art,
a most intoxicating enterprise
that made our minds delirious with happiness
revealing endless opportunities and possibilities;
but that was then, the children's golden age of long ago,
before the physical reality of love caused chronic introversion,
before relationships had caused their first upsets and schisms,
before we realized the world was mad,
before we started to grow up against our will,
before we parted and before you died,
my best friend of my childhood.
We were at the age of ten-eleven then,
the best years of our lives
which have survived us with their glory
staying there behind us in eternity
while we grew up and withered
deadlocked on our course
to the inevitable vanity of death.





Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-16 at 13:48

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Zoya Zaidi
Dear Christian, This is so true!
Childhood is indeed the best time of life-
Provided it is a happy one!
Because only then it prepares us
For the vagaries of life,
Which we are able to overcome
And remain mentally and psychlogically happy.
Otherwise, an unhappy childhood
Can make very broken adults...

(((Hugs for the thought provoking write!)))
Sorry for your best friend though!
Love, Zoya
2006-12-16


Kathy Lockhart
thank you Chris for the very moving and also so very true revelation in poetic form.
2006-12-16