Just writing whats on my mind


Just a Dream

My life seemed like such a dream

When at first we met

Who knew time would be the bomb

Causing an imminent threat

Wasn’t our love real at first

From the front lines it would seem

Yet lies entangled with the bare truth

Would burst our fairytale dream

Your attitude to what we had

Was normal and very surreal

Doubts about your whereabouts

Were sure to break this deal

All my life I wanted something

A love that could suffice

I found the one I was looking for

Said my prayers and rolled the dice

A match was made that would soon prove

Love couldn’t bear the hand of time

I was about to lose the one I cared about

The sacred force that made you mine

Slowly we started to fall out of touch

I couldn’t believe my eyes

The one that brought me continual happiness

Was just some lover in disguise

When at first you don’t succeed

They say to try again

Although I fought them tooth and nail

I couldn’t seem to win

I've accepted this detachment as just a loss

That I have suffered in life

I've accepted this pain that’s entered my soul

Along with the heartache and strife

Eventually I’ll find the will to move on

To a better place I guess

And expel the locks that bind my heart

Beneath my beating chest

Until that time my subtle pain

Will always be here to stay

I hope when time blesses me with forgiveness

My anguish will go away

Though the memory of your smiling face

With me will always stay





Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2007-06-06 at 04:03

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penfold18
Wonderfully written, full of heartache and passion, lets hope time is the great healer for you also.

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Zoya Zaidi
Beautifully expressed dear COOL!
This is a whole Saga of finding and losing a love and then evetually moving on... You are almost like a Sage in this poem, my dear Cool!
(((Hugs for an inspired and wise write)))
Love, Zoya

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