A response to "Cherries in My Lemonade" by Kathy Lockhart : )


Limes in My Lemonade

Limes in my lemonade
What a glorious cascade
Never met a melon rind
Yet my hearts feeling fine
Feeling the music of the street
And a popping song in my feet
Spending my days in the pie of life
Waiting to break free with loves knife
Theres a girl that makes my heart twirl
The oyster that contains my pearl
From one thing to another
She a person like no other
Fills my mind with a red rose
Something special I suppose
She calls me inifinite field
For each rose that I yield
Porch days and sun rays
Limes in my lemonade
What a delecious parade
Nothing touches my heart
Apart from the jade eyes
That stare into my soul
And like that take control
Of my bright life source
And put my sense back on course



Poetry by Coolaaron88
Read 894 times
Written on 2007-06-23 at 19:06

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Valerie
awsome! i absolutely love it! kinda made me giggle with the feeling and references you used. it was awsome!
Val
2007-06-25


Rob Graber
This truly exudes the exuberance of youth! Cool one, Cool...
2007-06-24


normalil
Such a treat to read Aaron, especially after reading the cherry poem. Liked it very much.
2007-06-23


Kathy Lockhart
Oh Aaron this is a delight. I am flattered that you have responded to my Cherries in My Lemonade poem with such a wonderful poem of your own. : )
2007-06-23