An idea inspired by a good friend.


Fight Me

Hit me once, hit me twice
Each solid punch keeps me alive
In this ring we now battle it out
Without this struggle I can’t survive
Blow by blow I take your fear
And I fall onto the floor
Wondering is there any hope inside
Can this mission mean nothing more
You back away as I start to swing
Dodging each and every strike
I know we have something special
You and me, our minds are alike
Just come over and fight me
With your strength and power
As this rounds clock counts down
I feel our love rise by the hour
Please fight me, it’s what I need
For this fight is not a disguise
As the final punch is thrown at me
You look into my eyes
I forgive your stupid faults
I forgive your painful lies
You won this fight we fought
You embrace me with remorse
Truth made itself revealed
And time had made its course
We fought the battle of time
And in the end we both had won
The next fight in life could begin
As the battle for love was done



Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2007-08-14 at 23:47

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Poetry-poofter
I love your rhymes, your very good at it.
Sometimes it's easier for me to rhyme in english than in swedish, but it's hard to get a real feeling.
But you don't have the same problem as I have, it's such a good flow in this poem. I love that I can see a boxing ring in my mind whit two persons who's fighting but I also see very much love.
You're a good poet.
2007-08-17