Amor

Please catch sight of me
quickly
like a deer in its useless hiding place

you are the hunter

let me be caught
easily
like a hare behind the cracked bushes

soon
let me quiver in your trap
quiver like the bowstring




Poetry by Loke
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Written on 2005-12-07 at 08:18

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Zoya Zaidi
Wow!
A shiver of desire goes down my spine!
What a perfect expression of desire & yearning for love!
Quivering with desire, longing and
smouldering fire...
Welcome to the Bay Loke!
Cupid might just strike with his bow here...
2005-12-07


penfold18
I liked this one straight away the pleading to be caught well done :-)
2005-12-07



these lines are so shivering with longing to be hit by Amor's arrow... A beautiful poem which goes right away into my faves!
2005-12-07