Wet garden

Every moment stabs me with longing
and makes me moulder without end

I am the ruin eternally crumbling

The stones in the garden wall cry in the rain
They cry mossy tears

And I kiss only the cold shadowplants

Hidden behind my betrayal
under the water lilies you sank
in a well

All I see are the reflections
of my repentant eyes





Poetry by Loke
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Written on 2005-12-15 at 16:55

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Allmax
Very deep and emotional poem with a nice smooth flow. Great ending. Leaving the reader with a hint of mystery....Allmax
2005-12-16


Esti D-G
Great write loke! loved "my repentant eyes"and " I am the ruin eternally crumbling" . Keep 'em coming!
lots of luv, esti
2005-12-15