Bombed dumbells of Bombay



They thought they would start a new war
between India and Pakistan
by detonating some bombs
in an effort to make 9/11 in India
by murdering innocents by many hundreds.
How daft can you get?
There does not seem to be any limit.
For once, politicians were actually innocent,
muslims in general more shocked than christians
at this amok-running unhuman derangement
that no one can sympathise with
and that nothing, and least of all any religion,
can justify or make excuses for.
As a suicide attack, it only backfired completely
and hurt most the cause of the guilty delinquents,
if they indeed even at all had a cause.







Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-12-01 at 16:23

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normalil
Well said Christian. The war against terror, although a kind of contradiction in terms, is WW3.
2008-12-05


Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
I like how you use the word "unhuman" rather than the more common "inhuman", I think that was a nice effect. :-)
And yes, I imagine that the Muslims are very shocked at this, even more than the Christians. That sounds about right, but I'm sure the true believers of all the faiths (especially in that area) are very shocked and appalled at this grave atrocity that has been commited.

And I'm sure they had a cause: destroy the holy temple, for it is of another religion, it is unholy and an insult to our god (versus "their" god).

Nicely written, Christian, great work!

T.
2008-12-02


Dan Cederholm
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I love your point of wiew here Chris
and terror is and never going to be
something that people look up for
I think Ghandis anti violence is better
when they have killed us all are they
going to kill each other after that . . .?

*APPLAUSE*

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2008-12-01


Kathy Lockhart
amen! Christian. applause for this strong and eloquent text about the crisis of our time.
2008-12-01


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bobes are kind of neutral , when it explodes it dos not ask: '' are you a Christian? , are you a Moslem? , are you an Hindu? , are you a Jew? , are you a none believer? , are you from the U K? are you from the U S A?. NO , the bomb kills and maims with out showing any faver to any one , it kills , one & all.
The crime is a human crime , if only Saldin* , could make a come back.

( I suggest people read up on Salidin , a great man. How we miss such great men.)

Well writan , put over very well, Chris.

Ken ( D Williams)
2008-12-01



Yes it was such a dumb attack on innocent people which just lost life and credibility all round Christian, Such a shame for the people of Mumbai and all those who lost loved ones. You express the waste and stupidity of it so well in the 'dumbells' word of the title alone.

All the best to you

Tai
2008-12-01