My first haiku!!


My love

My love is selfless,
Promise to stay together,
Till death do us part.



Haiku by Kshiti Dubey
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Written on 2008-12-23 at 07:33

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
I must say - this is the most simple haiku I've ever read. Yet it's the most effective, and the most beautiful Haiku to date.
Thankyou for sharing, my friend.

Regards,
John.
2010-11-28


salem
nice haiku
go on
2008-12-23


rajesh poonia
love doesn't part....a good try welldone keep it up
2008-12-23