Descartes does it so well
i do it horribly


Je Pense Donc Je Suis

I am I think...
Therefore
I think I am here.
Or frightfully near.
Or I don't exist...
Therefore neither
Do you
And yet you do
As shown as I think
You affect me.
Let me think awhile
Therefore.
I know!
Let me confuse your mind!
I am thinking I am
Crazy close to you.







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Written on 2009-05-17 at 05:38

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Sid Gardner
I think I have nearly arrived but the train left early..
Sid xx.
2009-05-26


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2009-05-19



Descartes is dead. You're definitely alive!
2009-05-17


NicholasG
You are not here!
You are there.
But that is neither here nor there.
Truth be had, you've arrived
The cat is proof!
Don't let her get your tongue:-)
2009-05-17



I especially like the playful ending. It comes as a delightful surprise after all the existentialist pondering in the rest of the poem. Nice work, as always.
2009-05-17


melanie sue
....and is that a cat I see on your computer? lol, my cat, Gizmo, does the same thing!
2009-05-17


melanie sue
I like this! Funny what that loving feeling can do to our heads!
2009-05-17


penfold18
Reminds me of some thing by the moody blues, threshold of a dream seems to come to mind, either way much enjoyed reading.
2009-05-17


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
That fine thread between us all, hmmm... I agree.
2009-05-17