Balancing

Here is the roundness...
The moment of life that the
Awareness of putting away
The strife
Makes us rather happy
Even when we're cornered.

If we can live without causing
Intentional harm
We might live in a world
That's spherical...
If by chance we choose empirical
Then we can look outwards...
All around in fact...

Life is a mere balancing act.



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-05-26 at 05:12

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NicholasG
We need a worm hole or secret passage or magic beans or something unsettling on the fringe, otherwise we'll all be sitting duck soup!!
:-) Nick
2009-05-27


Rob Graber
This has a very well-rounded feel indeed!

:-,?
2009-05-26


melanie sue
I like the imagery used in this, too. But sometimes I think we need the "corners" so that the people that misbehave can stand in them!
2009-05-26


Sid Gardner
The act is only as good as the guy who adjusts the tightrope.
Too much slack and difficulty arises, too tight and we get over confident.Whichever if we fall there is no net to catch us.We plunge down to god knows where.
Sid xx
2009-05-26



Loved this Linda, I will keep trying to juggle, but the weights are getting hellish heavy...

A very good reminder...

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-05-26


weirdzarun
Fascinating to a large degree, with such imagery that paints the perfect picture by means of excellent literature. And it rocks, too.
2009-05-26