Love and physics



I found my love so far away
that it would seem a matter of far-fetchedness
to bring it and to keep it up to date,
and thus my closest friends, both male and female,
are the farthest distanced from me;
but at the same time, this might be the very proof
that love is independent of the physical conditions
and survives the better for adversity and trial,
if it's genuine and true.
My love is therefore closer to me than she ever was
although our wordly distance is unbridgeable
except by the communion of the souls
which easily breaks any rule of physics.





Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-06-04 at 09:53

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Wangdi Gyalpo
hie... after quite some time, I got the opportunity to read your work. I really enjoyed your work. Although melancholic at first, but rejuvenated at last knowing the utter truth of love. Liked it the way it is written with eloquence.

You are indeed right when you say, 'Which easily breaks any rule of physics'.

A small suggestion: in one of your lines i.e., (if it's genuine and true.) Wouldn't it be better to remove a word, either genuine or true?
2009-06-04