Not a recipe for a healthy marriage.


Betrayal Haiku

My long-kept secret
Finally divulged in trust
Now you've spilled the beans.



Poetry by Nancy Sikora
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Written on 2011-01-23 at 14:58

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Doreen Cavazza
Nicely done. It's playful and fun.
2011-04-20


Rob Graber
O no, not the beans!
Well, don't cry over spilled beans,
Not even long-kept.

:-,?
2011-01-24


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
I have to say that the final line brought a smile. Which i guess is the desired impact of a Haiku. Although i do appreciate that the message here has greater significance than a smile. A good Haiku enjoyed the read.
2011-01-23


shells
I hope the recipe doesn't spell disaster, great haiku, sad subject, betrayal crushes.
2011-01-23