hope

 

perhaps
like an aging dog
and a favourite tree
I find myself
seeking comfort
in places familiar
little changed
from my youth
now youth defies me
in body
if not in spirit
I value
more than I can say
the kiss of a gentle breeze
as I meander
where I strode
a student
of the times
my mind
and body
detached
some years ago
yet
as I return
to the clarity
of my youth
values not clouded
by age
older in time
not heart
I love to live
and love again
the bitter
sweet taste
of hope

 





Poetry by Peter Humphreys
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Written on 2012-06-17 at 14:39

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Rob Graber
Very moving; those last five lines are really something! What is sweeter than to embrace the bitter sweetness of it all? There lies such victory as can be.
2012-06-19


Mark J. Wood
Hi Peter,

we spend youth hoping for a better tomorrow and, when tomorrows start to run out, we start hoping for a better yesterday.

Thanks Peter - instead of wasting my time writing one of my own, I have wisely spent the time reading yours: there's nothing like a good lunch with an old friend - especially when he's paying (your currency is accepted everywhere).

Mark (another aging dog who's just read a favourite tree - there must be a joke in there about barks).
2012-06-19


NicholasG
I agree with Emma totally. Always a pleasure to read your writing. Always inspiring. This is very applicable in lieu of my impending move.
Thank you Peter.
Bravo!
2012-06-18


countryfog
You've expressed better than I can my own thoughts. I'm not so sure though about "the clarity of youth" . . . certainly things seemed clearer then, simpler, more black and white, but for me it seems now that it was mostly because I was so self-centered. With age comes some measure of wisdom, learned more from mistakes than successes, and a realization that the world doesn't revolve around us.
2012-06-17


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
One of the pleasures about belonging on this site is to read one of your poems, I can't express how much admiration I have for your writing and I thank you for that.

Elle x
2012-06-17