| i lust you
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2011-08-17
thank you amandeep and thank you emaralde!
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| Untitled
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2010-12-05
so subtle yet quite powerful!
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| CREAMTION GROUNDS SEEN BY A BOY NARRATED BY DEATH
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2010-07-15
thnk u ken.. thnk u vry much!! i m humbled!
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| A REAL MAN
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2010-02-26
it was like readin a poetry by a middle age princess... now all women r all about empowerment.. rnt they?
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| Love Maxima!!
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2010-02-22
WHAT CRAPPOLA DUDE!
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| Regret
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2008-08-16
ekisha.. hw cn we hunt fr destiny but yet feel no regrets... dnt u think that if we hunt destiny that means that we have given up our destiny and r searching everywhere as a symbol of dependence.. ???
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| WALKING WITH SOLITUDE
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2008-08-06
quite gud anshul... but try to be a bit more impersonal.. this poem is so personal that only u can understand its full meaning
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| SHE CAME TO FIND HIM GONE!
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2008-08-04
very thought invoking!
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| untitled
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2008-08-02
it sounds like a linkin park song
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| DISAPPEARED
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2008-05-22
brilliant, beautiful yet sad... but the world isnt all bad...
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| A QUESTION
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2008-05-22
example of how length and brilliance are independent of each other!
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| What dreams are made of
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2008-05-20
well expressed...
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| Your Aromatic Smell
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2007-12-22
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...
i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!
dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking
ur servent
ansh
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| Your Aromatic Smell
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2007-12-22
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...
i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!
dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking
ur servent
ansh
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| Your Aromatic Smell
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2007-12-22
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...
i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!
dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking
ur servent
ansh
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| Your Aromatic Smell
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2007-12-22
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...
i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!
dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking
ur servent
ansh
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| Your Aromatic Smell
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2007-12-22
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...
i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!
dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking
ur servent
ansh
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| Your Aromatic Smell
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2007-12-22
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...
i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!
dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking
ur servent
ansh
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| TO ALL MY FREINDS , A HAPPY TIME , A HAPPY LIFE
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2007-12-21
thanx.. and happy christmas in advance... well ken i am an indian and we celebrate children day at 14 th november... so ur poem has some techinal faults... but believe me .. ur poem has achieved the sound of distinct old songs... happy, gay and full of life
best
averruncus
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| YOU PHOND LAST NIGHT
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2007-11-26
wonderful poem.... it fills the definition of a poem that is it is based on single vast emotion... congrats for being the producer of such freat stuff!!
PS i hope this is not a personal experience... lolz!!
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| SAT ON A STONE , TAKEN TIME OUT TO THINK
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2007-10-05
its very much lyrics of a song by eminem... oh no i am not blaming u for cheating i am honoring u b comparing u wid eminem... in my opinion he is a big poet himself..
the poem is suberb in short
regards
averruncus
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| Envy.
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2007-10-03
u know sir?? ur poem sounds like dimmu borgir's lyrics its my favorite badn.. and they r brilliant.. just as u r brilliant in this poem
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| A Disillusioned Soldier.
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2007-10-03
... ohh.... i am still having illusions of ur poem"disillusioned soldie" i am so touched by ur poem.. its really a work of genius... only indians can understand it truly though! it has some resemblence with the song "the trooper" by iron maiden butit was based on russian british background...
congrats for writing such a great poem
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| SOME TIMES I FEEIL SO LOW THEN........
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2007-10-03
poems like this reflect true feelings of the poet .. really i am suree u have written this afterfeeling this!
regards
averruncus
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| Rosa Romanova
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2007-09-27
really ma'am! it is very good!
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| STRANGE BUT TRUE
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2007-09-20
ohh man.. really?? is it true ken??? if yes then yes its simply amazing!!
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| GALLIPOLI APRIL 1915 LANCASHIRE LANDING
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2007-09-10
ken u r rite.. its very touching indeed!!
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| THE TIMES WE LIVE IN
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2007-09-05
ken i think after a great war there will be peace till then there is no rest for us.... there will be a great war in which only one will win and we will become one nation.. under the name of earth not india pakistean etc
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| OUT OF BODY TRAVALING
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2007-08-15
u know sir, ur poetry has sum shades of coleridge... just like him!
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| why be so confused?
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2007-07-04
really... u said the truth in ur description!
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| Sex and Abuse
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2006-10-18
A classic poem!!!!
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| The Gift.
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2006-09-29
A enjoyable text
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| Betrayed
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2006-09-25
This is a brilliant poem in very simple words
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| Lessons learnt from life
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2006-09-25
just awesome!!!!
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| steve
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2006-09-24
very good
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| It's Life
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2006-09-24
this is real life
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