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2011-10-24
such a deep one. i really enjoyed the flow of it. keep writing!
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| A Precious Treasure
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2011-10-24
...see me beside you when you fall asleep.
Syer this is deep and beautiful. I quite enjoy your poems.
Keep writing!
Are you on facebook?
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| My sleep has memory
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2011-10-06
Wow!!! this is a masterpiece. this poem will fly.
thanks for sharing.
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| Libation
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2011-05-07
hmmm!!!...you are good.
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| Revenge
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2010-12-31
shedding tears for a perfectly expressed emotion. Revenge.
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| Days into Nights
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2010-12-31
there comes a time when the heart no longer shares in the reason of the mind.
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| You came.You play,you think!
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2010-12-31
...there is only one me." Well said. An emotional piece!
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| The Chronicle of Life.
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2010-07-09
do some really have the breath to fill in the gaps ? nice work.
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| A Love Song of the Two
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2010-07-09
i love the flow of this poem. a romantic narrative one. great job!
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| Hello, Hello!
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2010-06-19
a great fun you created here. i enjoy the rhyming.
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| Everlasting
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2009-07-26
voice of a true disciple.
what more shall i say?
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| dream
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2009-07-26
unveil the curtains and catch his arms.
great piece.
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| Is This What They Call Haiku
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2008-02-08
Wright, i like your sincerity and open-mindedness.
what more?
whispers.
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| A Gift Of Constant Pain
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2008-02-08
this hits a mean heart...
a sad story of life in the other side.
so real and well told.
keep it flowing Ex-warrior.
whispers.
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| Sometimes I feel I am the Rain
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2007-07-08
imagery beautifully used. this poem flows smoothly intothe inner chambers of the soul. A masterpiece.
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| Purpose
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2007-07-08
Ken,believe it ,u are born to liberate many out there. I say this because of the sincererity in ur words. I see the seed of a motivator in u, let the words keep flowing out from ur heart.
Cheers!
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| They've called her Joan
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2007-06-27
I pray she grows to appreciate the love shown to her by those who found her in the box. This piece brings to our bare the senseless acts that still goes on in the society.
thanks for the piece.
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2007-06-24
being titled "UNTITLED", shows the honest tunes, the truthfullness and the emparthic nature of this piece.
Rox. thanx for inspiring me for a new piece i just wrote.
Cheers!
jesse (my real name).
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| Standing In The Storm
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2007-06-24
there is indeed more in u than u're even thinking. Val, u'll no doubt make a great poet. keep it up!
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| Unretainable
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2007-06-24
with a few touches, u'll make a hit song from this piece. i just love it . hey! Vale i like ur poetic mind.
jesse ( my real name).
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| May I Take Your Coat Or Maybe Even Your Heart?
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2007-06-24
reminds me of the funny beginings of all love stories. good work.
cheers!
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| Striving after I am. . .
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2007-05-29
philosophical.
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| ExIsTeNcE
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2007-05-29
life painted as it is . any more to it? i guess not . pretty expression of existence. thumbs up!!!!
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| The ten commandments of pantheism
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2007-05-12
should i call this a revised version of the ten commandments, well , thanx for reminding us all about the prevailence of truth. nice piece.
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| Hells angels
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2007-05-12
i see u climbing dante's ladder.
take a note of the last line, "in the corner ... my eye" , a typo i guess it is. nice piece.
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| Hells angels
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2007-05-12
hey! u are a writer with a difference. i like ur style. tapping the gifts of silence...hummmmm. i like u
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| Not another Madonna it's not your stage persona
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2007-05-12
if only we can be as real as u pose in this piece, honesty will rule the day. thanx for sending this soul arrow, i love it.
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| "It ends tonight"
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2007-05-05
ur poems are soul arresting.
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| Love Hurts
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2007-03-01
A poet at heart is a poet indeed. Truth is, what is love without pains?. A question answered .
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| Philosophy
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2007-03-01
what a soul captivating piece of work. No doubt you are bound to face the hottest critics, which ofcourse, would bring you to limelight. Good piece.
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