| e-lationship
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2007-04-13
Oh my, another new word for Webster's 'e-lationships' - kind of a interesting play on 'elation' as well - was that intended??
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| The violet
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2007-04-13
Short but sweetly poignant, strong imagery within as well.
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| The Honeysuckle And The Rose by M.A.Meddings
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2007-04-10
Endearing, although not sure each line needs to be capitalized. It threw me off when reading. However, I did quite enjoy the story here.
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| How Falls the Night, Fine Sir?
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2007-04-10
As Nepenthes quoted, it reminded me of the flow of Frost's work (one of my all-time favorite poets). So soothing and lovely!
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| I am just a boy...
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2007-03-28
I get this fragile, delicate feel when I read this. Love the ending especially.
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| On my lips
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2007-03-28
Believe you are missing a "s" in pressure. Aside from that, this was tastefully done, very sensual yet hot. Kudos!
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| Writer's Block
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2007-03-27
ahhhh, blue screen of death... I enjoyed this alot!
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| Bite
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2007-03-27
An excellent nonet coupled with your usual knack for alliteration, I'm glad I found this one!
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| Mary's Song
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2007-03-12
Your fun, perky style is so refreshing. It's a nice change of pace from what many (myself included) poets write. I envy the spirit of whimsy who is your muse! :)
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| Julie's Road
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2007-03-12
"take one step at a time my baby blue;
the fast lane is under construction.
dawn sires Arizona sunshine for you."
That is just one snippet of perfection. I love how easily you seem to write, using raw energy and words that just meld together perfectly.
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| Love Without End
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2007-03-12
Really liked the line "floating across moon shadows", excellent visual. Also enjoy the soft, gentle flow to this.
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| Reality's delusion
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2007-03-07
"awakening children singing hymns glorifying death" - This line in particular really catches my attention. The work entire is pointed and speaks but this line...just keep going back to it.
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| Crimson Asphalt
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2007-03-07
Severe imagery - great usage to really paint a picture. I could envision easily, specially "blood and body parts fusing roadway". Chilling.
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