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2008-03-09
Havent been around for quite a few months! This poem is the first one I have read after almost 4 months and it came as a breather!
Wonderfully imagined, Splendidly crafted!!!! Yours one of the best!!
My fav:
"Some get thrown out eventually,
Others slam the door
And leave cracks on their way out."
"After all, you don't own the room.
You don't even know who keeps the keys!
Someday you might gain the keys
Or pick the lock."
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| She
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2007-08-28
She doesn't KNOW who she is or where she's going...
i think the caps portion u missed while writing the poem....anyway this time too ur screaming silence can be heard...come out of the loneliness through the inspiration of these poems....keep smiling!!
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| Without you
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2007-08-27
Don't underestimate me
I am powerful with or
Without you.
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powerfully written indeed...love these lines!
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| The broken heart.
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2007-08-27
hhhmmm....same old love issues...still so many new expressions...well written..
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| Lost
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2007-08-27
self-resurrection is something we all do at some point of our life...well expressed...
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| ..Sorry...
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2007-08-27
you are one jewel of a poet....emotions well heard....kip riting...
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| Exceedingly average
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2007-08-27
is it somewhat depicting the constant questions that rule the mind of teenagers as to what is our true identity?? ..where do we stand among millions of other students???...do we really stand in a good position in any field when there are so many ,already around??...
Well if its so,i too, feel the same way often...thnx for sharing!
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| Thoughtful
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2007-08-14
such melancholic words....i find all your poems writhed with pain and sorrow.....
cheer up soul....kip smiling....let the moon be by ur side in the darkest of nights....be fearless..just what you have written in another poem!
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| Night's Unwinding
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2007-08-14
great imagination!!!
and a perfect name given to the poem.
thoughts unwinding!!
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| The Fray
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2007-07-21
strange blending of rhytm and thought.
excellent piece!
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| The Glacial Prison
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2007-07-21
wonderfully expressed!!
i liked the expressions like "biting tears" , "glacial prison" and many more.
good poetry here.
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| Creation's Blessing
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2007-07-16
so loving!!
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| everything in anything
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2007-07-16
mind blowing.
Keep playing with words.
We will find the meaning!
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| Slipping away
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2007-07-16
heartfelt and touching.
simple yet good write here!
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| 71) This is Life
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2007-07-15
Ya!!
i agree with u absolutely!
this is life and sometimes it becomes unbearable to live devoid of life when we face the grind of hectic life.
have you read my poem "YET ANOTHER DAY" ?the theme is quite like dis.
great write here.
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| I Picked You A Daisy
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2007-07-15
enjoyed reading this poem....sometimes we just have to leave the past behind!
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| How far can you go?
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2007-07-14
I am just loving your writings filled with so much veracity!
well done!
keep preaching such thoughts!
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| The Curse
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2007-07-14
an excellent write here....
i have never read such a dark poem!!
excellent!!
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| RANDOMIZED JAZZ.......
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2007-07-13
imagination well expressed...
keep writing.
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| The way things should be
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2007-07-12
Quite an unusual one!
enjoyed reading this poetry.
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| The Desolate One
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2007-07-12
Specially the last two lines...sorry for the spelling mistake in my prev msg.
:)
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| The Desolate One
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2007-07-12
I loved this one!!Speacially the last two lines...
Keep writing.
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| all my roses wither and die
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2007-07-12
life is not a fairy tale
and I wish the best for you
we have to move on with all the pain...
a heartfelt one...
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| Together and Yet Apart
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2007-07-12
quite an unusual one....
enjoyed reading this one very much..
applauds!!
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| dream
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2007-07-11
just an impeccable blend of thoughts and rythm...
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| Looking up death
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2007-07-11
"like Christ after his crucifixion and his resurrection."
You have an unusual mastery in preaching,professing and sharing priceless ideas.
a great message!!
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| In this changing weather
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2007-07-11
keep writing dear....
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| The Silent Action of Words
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2007-07-11
Your words confuse me
Your actions deceive me
But your silence is killing me.
very touching!
Silence has its unnoticed virtue and as a song says "silence must be heard"....great poetry!
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| MY DREAM AND MY NATION
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2007-07-11
I too would like to vide my country in such a corruption-free way.
thanks for sharing how you feel.
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| 70) Never Stop Dreaming
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2007-07-11
inspirational!!
thnx!!
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| Nothing was enough for you
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2007-07-11
powerfully expressed!!
your deep emotions have come out very well...
its the name of the poem "nothing was enough for you" that has touched me the most with its double meaning!!
kip smiling!
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| A REBELLIOUS BIRD
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2007-07-10
agony,hatred,frustrations...n all expressed in a dark n revolutionary way!
great write-up!
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| When the tears have dried from your face
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2007-07-10
such professing truth!!
i loved it!
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| Because You Know That They Care
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2007-07-10
so heart-wrenching,so much heartfelt!!
may his soul rest in peace.
and wish u a very happy birthday!!!
kip smiling :)
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| In Passing Bye
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2007-07-10
it has a song-like feeling!!
enjoyable one!
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| Ochre Moon
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2007-06-29
just amazing!!!
too good ...too mesmerising...just like the moon in the sky!
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| untitled again
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2007-06-29
i enjoyed reading the poem....i too am feeling the same thing for quite sometime!!
kip up ur good wrk!
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| Hidden Shadows
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2007-03-20
the pains of a failed love..u have brought it out beautifully...
i understand ur feelings reflected thru the poem....great work!
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| Liberation's Kiss
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2007-03-18
very intriguing...i like the way u leave ur poems to readers' interpretation...great job!
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| Cycle of Life
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2007-03-17
beautiful!!
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