| Dying To Love
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2009-07-29
only a lover could have written this.
and as soon as we become lovers we become vulnerable to so many things.
of course they are all quite worth it...
especially if they are nice...
us poets are open to so many things
...even losses stack up values.
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| Store box
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2008-08-23
the memories evoked by reading this delicious poem are warming.
I am happy that you are writing again.
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| All this Over a Stupid Boy
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2008-08-21
i hear.
we all go through it.
if you are questioning you know your answers.
good work...
publish more.
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| Chorus
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2008-08-21
playful.
and not crappy at all.
in fact liked-.
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| Emergence Of The Bereaved
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2008-08-21
of course.
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| Emergence Of The Bereaved
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2008-08-21
what is bereved?
is it a genetic thing?
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| What its really like
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2008-08-21
yes i do,
always good to be reminded to think.
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| Dona eis requiem (give them peace)
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2008-08-20
peace beats.
how clever.
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| The Sky
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2008-08-20
i somehow like called clouds.
and how you view your sky.
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| Little Cloud
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2008-08-19
what a delightful sun.
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| Musings from the Forty Yardline
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2008-08-19
bookmarked immediately.
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| Musings from the Forty Yardline
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2008-08-19
your poetry is music.
excellent.
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| Messages and comments issues
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2008-08-16
well it would seem that klass has left the class.
what now?
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| A Heavy Load
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2008-08-16
mmmm...
death is what we think follows life.
and is maybe what we all may be waiting for
each in our own unique way.
who knows.
i've only ever stood and waved.
thought provoking fun.
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| Narcissist
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2008-08-14
hey i think kathy should fight her own battles.
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| Brush Strokes
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2008-08-10
well I dont know where you have been...
but welcome back with this.
love how you flow...
and the hard won simplicity.
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| Fat chance
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2008-08-06
humour it!
the exact same thing has happened to me!
i need to make more space for my body.
i smile wider all the while.
shall we consult on misery
or accept our bicicles?
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| The Grieving Heart
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2008-08-06
a grieving heart is never hungry.
grief is never measured.
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| Blood Is The Drug
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2008-08-06
very energetic indeed.
now i have noted your energy
what is your point?
i too have blood.
and memories of several drugs.
what's the hurry?
above said
im obviously interested.
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| In The Summer
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2008-08-01
I like this.
You have a voice that speaks simply.
I appreciate that.
I think it will soon be winter.
Hope to hear more from you before then.
regards linda.
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| Living with Uncertainty
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2008-07-30
I see you understand the uncertainties...
therein surely lies happiness.
or perhaps not
depends on the attitude i suppose.
good thoughts here.
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| Merry meet
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2008-07-28
well timed,
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| Cleopatra's Glory
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2008-07-24
love to read this
love the history
the romance
the fascinating society
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| It Was No Hard Sell
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2008-07-24
parts of our bodies are standard.
everybodys foot size is the same as their forearm i believe.
its the gentle form of appreciation
that pleases me about this write...
that and your wit about the real world.
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| We Can't Go Back
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2008-07-19
Your poetry makes me move my mouth...
because of the humour
and playfulness...
and the way the words connect.
youre goood at that.
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| We Can't Go Back
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2008-07-19
Your poetry makes me move my mouth...
because of the humour
and playfulness...
and the way the words connect.
youre goood at that.
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| Poetbay rant - any suggestions?
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2008-07-09
thank goodness we have the likes of you arti!
you and the likes of you are very important here.
please dont think you are not read.
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| Site Info June
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2008-06-26
we all have things to do i know.
but if you are accepting money from people in receipt of a service I'm afraid "too busy" will not do.
If you are too busy to attend to us please say so up front.
This attitude of taking the money and run just enough to keep people quiet...has gone on far too long.
Fold your hands if need be
Stop stringing us along!
And while your at it stop asking for new members.
It's called robbery.
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| Just A Bowl Of Cherries?
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2008-06-25
ive just spent 2 hours trying to say this.
you say it better,
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| In despair
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2008-06-24
this is so ethereal and despondent at the beginning and finishes firmly.
Despair is an awful feeling I know.
Never easy to work your way out of.
But we work.
As it seems you are doing.
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| hope has failed me
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2008-06-24
but you are yourself and you belong to you!
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| Walking through rainbows
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2008-06-21
this is clever.
and appreciated for the work
as ever your love of words shows.
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| Poetry On Catfeet
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2008-06-18
So you are not poetic emptying the dishwasher?
Strangely nor am I.
Stroking cats feet however
Causes poetry to me.
Could you please tell me more
About the paramour though?
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| Summer
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2008-06-18
mmm enjoy!
Life will crop up soon enough.
As I'm sure you know,
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| is it us or them?
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2008-06-18
For me this is wonderful!
We all ask this question if we are smart enough.
Sadly many people wont or are not afforded such luxury.
The fact we ask guarantees a form of happiness.
imho only ;)
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| Wake up now!
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2008-06-16
funnily enough this a well established mind-set where I live...
along with not wanting die healthy...
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| I have only 1 rule
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2008-06-16
oh yes there are!
and never resrict yourself:)
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| Do not stay with him
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2008-06-15
Tell her to leave immediately...
she must negotiate nothing-.
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| Do You See My Love Tremble by M.A.Meddings
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2008-06-14
do you mean like someone will continue to take the money if he can whilst having a donation point that works continually?
oh shush!
I must only listen to grief!
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| Heart Monitor
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2008-06-12
his beautiful is you.
a resounding remembrance.
you must be proud of him.
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| Sufficiency
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2008-06-11
im afraid you over complicate.
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| Do You See My Love Tremble by M.A.Meddings
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2008-06-11
thanks for comments wee2souls.
In response I will explain myself.
I have no interest about your life really.
In all honesty
Nor you in me...
For me poetbay is a place where I share my work.
Maybe I could be considered harsh but Im old enough to know each and every one of us here that is breathing has a history.
What else would we draw on that enables us to write?
I ask the question though are we poets or are we fan clubs?
I would be very happy to see a Mr Meddings place on the bay.
I always enjoyed his work.
What i do object to is for his loss to be paraded.
I understand the need for comfort but in my humble opinion this is best done in private messaging.
I do have concerns also if it his family's wish to have his words used right now.
I ask these questions most respectfully.
And am interested in any responses.
I do not respond to tirades though.
Linda
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| Do You See My Love Tremble by M.A.Meddings
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2008-06-10
Im sorry but I find the posting of this work worrying.
We have been told that Mr Meddings has expired.
Surely it is only decent to wait until his estate and subsequent copywrite issues are established in law before his work is brought forward in this way.
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| Rhyme of Love
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2008-06-09
you sent me back to nursery!
good move!
good poem.
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| i love you more than all and then some.
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2008-06-08
sounds as though this love has a chance!
love is a happy thing.
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| There's A Baby Being Born
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2008-06-08
a bouncing baby boy!
my friends sixth grandchild!
welcome to the world Liam!
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| Shades of Summer
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2008-06-07
all the delights of summer!
interesting to pass through your day!
shades become you.
so do the active colours.
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| How sweet can become sweeter?
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2008-06-06
I'm already puckered up! ;)
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| Frightening society
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2008-06-04
don't be frightened
embrace life!
with all the usual cautions of course.
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| Gentle Giant
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2008-06-02
I used to sleep in trees.
Its wonderful.
A well written write that took me on the intended journey I think.
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