| Stuck
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2020-11-12
So beautifully written that it gives a kind of sweet pain...yes, we know it hurts, yet we dwell in the shadows of our past.
Thank you for sharing this.
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| The Flower of beauty
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2020-11-09
Simplicity at its best.
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| a mime that likes dialogue
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2020-11-09
There's a certain translucense in your writings that quite enjoyable, relatable and thought provoking.
It's witty and sophisticated at the same time.
Keep writing, I love your work.
Regards,
Amy
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| The Cremation of Sam McGee
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2020-11-08
So deep and introspective.
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| Constorts
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2020-11-03
A clamor given form... I like the rhyme and the wistfulness.
Thank you for sharing.
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| writing with meraki
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2020-11-03
So intense and pensive... thank you
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| A Modest Wit
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2020-11-02
l love poems like these... they are so witty and sharp like a nail in the head.
Selleck Osborn - applaud
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| Winter woman by Ann Wood
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2020-11-02
So beautiful and picturesque.
Love it.
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| IT'S ALL ABOUT TIMEING OV AGE
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2020-11-02
So poignant...
I wonder where I belong.
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| Geometry
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2020-11-02
This poem so beautifully describes the movement of the sun and the season. Thanks, Jim
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| Heart
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2020-10-29
Sad and yet fond thoughts are the most difficult ones. It's the loss like this like losing your shadow, and reading it brings tears and fond memories of dear ones. Today, I have been writing about loss, and your wonderful poem just intensified my feelings.
Take care.
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| waiting
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2020-10-29
Ya, we are all waiting for everything to be back to normal and multihued again. Expressed so well.
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| desire
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2020-10-29
The flow here is so smooth. I felt like flowing with it. Thanks.
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| The bare neccesities of life?
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2020-10-29
This made me laugh...thank you for the joy
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| chemistry
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2020-10-29
Never is a long time
Wonderfully refreshing.
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| Snow Falls
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2015-03-14
Beautiful !!
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| SOME TIMES I'M ASKED
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2013-08-07
So true.... I will continue living forever in the memories of my dear ones and through the smiles of people who read my work after I m gone....
Lovely Ken!!
LOL,
Amy
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| Why We Call It Passing Away
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2013-08-07
I have always loved reading your work. They are thoughtful with a profoundness that's rare. The most powerful verse in this one for me is "Not by what is gained but by what is lost"... It really makes me wonder why we are so sad most of the times and why can't we be happy for what we have rather than being sad for what we don't have...
Beautiful one...
LOL,
Amy
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| Found
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2012-12-20
Feelings are intense and deep and I love this piece so much... Free spirit, love of the man you love and in the presence of God 's awesomeness are certainly beautiful and intense feelings.
Made me relate so well.
Keep it up!!
LOL,
Amy
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| "7"autumn haiku
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2012-12-20
Lovely...
I like the first and second the most.
LOL,
Amy
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| Oh didn't the year fly by...
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2012-12-11
Every year as the Christmas season draws near, this feeling n realization that the year just flew becomes so overpowering...
Your poem is just so bright and festive....
Good work..
LOL,
Amy
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| We All Die Unhealed
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2012-12-04
Lovely story, dear!!
LOL,
Amy
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| Lonely December
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2012-12-04
I don't know why but the emotions seem so familiar to me.. When we want people around us the most, unfortunately its then that we are so lonely...
Beautifully nostalgic.
LOL,
Amy
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| Musings on Change
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2012-12-01
Indeed pleasant...
I used to wake up in the early morns
With sun's soft kisses and tender warmth
And now the nights have lengthened
And the early morns are wispy, misty lingerings
Of foggy unendings and breaths...
Happy Winters!!!
Amy
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| Love Late in Life
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2012-12-01
Loving someone and being loved by someone always feels great. However, sometimes... most of the times... in (early love) the commitment needed to keep loving someone and sharing lives till the end seems such a difficult thing to do.
Your advice and the poem both are splendidly beautiful.
To love someone knowing all that love entails and keep loving that someone thru'out one's life is something that I would like to do as well.
Very warm and introspective.
LOL,
Amy
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| Under a Bed of Lies
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2012-11-29
Hi,
This piece is just so intense, so beautifully and meaningfully crafted.
And I just wish for you that may you find that hope, trust, love and faith in your heart again.
Maybe somethings are easier said than done.
Maybe the woman who betrayed the young man didn't know what she might lose.
Awaiting a happier sequel...
LOL,
Amy
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| Miles Apart but Still Near
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2012-11-08
Thank you dearest for the wonderful thoughts.
Even if I were a butterfly
I would chase the seagulls and fly to you
I won't mind my tired broken wings
Because I would find rest and peace beside you.
LOL,
Amy
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| I feel your touch
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2012-10-25
Lovely imagery... I esp. like the first stanza and the verse "they roll into the corner of my eyes"
LOL,
Amy
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| The journey
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2012-10-20
It is sad and happy and beautiful and romantic and so much more or all that it could be...
Very lovely write...
LOL,
Amy
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| First Frost
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2012-10-17
Hi,
You reminded me of some of my good old days. So, I have put up something for you and your grandson (The Sea of Dandelions).
And also a reminder that spring comes around every year :)
LOL,
Amy
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| Anamnesis
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2012-10-13
Lovely.
God couldn't be present with us physically so He created mothers.
LOL,
Amy
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| Up In The Sky
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2012-10-12
Lovely poem....
And so true...
Keep it up.
LOL,
Amy
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| Rockaway
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2012-10-12
Summers used to be such pleasant delights some years back... I recalled my summers when I was in school - swimming in the stream, eating mangoes, sleeping in the portico and watching the twinkling stars...
Loved every word of your muse...
LOL,
Amy
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| You Said.......
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2012-10-10
Going through the same ordeal...
But still I hope that someday, i may find someone who can love me just the way i am...
Beautiful emotions....
LOL,
Amy
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| Life as it comes...
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2012-04-04
Lovely poem and so true...
LOL,
Amy
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| March Night
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2012-03-29
The best way I can appreciate 'March Night' is to simply say, your poem took me there and I vividly remember watching the stars, esp. the constellation 'The Big Dipper' popularly known as 'Saptarishi' in India.
LOL,
Amy
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| The wave on the ocean of love
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2012-03-27
We are all but a lost wave
Floating unmindful yet mindful on the ocean of love
Searching endlessly and yet not knowing
We are where we ought to be
O the ocean of love.
Had to be a poetical response.
Truly amazing!!!
LOL,
Amy
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| Stranger
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2012-03-20
A bitter truth of life... yearning to love back though it may hurt... exposed beautifully.
Cheers.
LOL,
Amy
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| dream house
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2012-03-19
Idyllic... I just wish I were born in the 18th century. Thanks for posting this beautiful poem on poetbay.
LOL,
Amy
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| WOW! You're Growing up
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2012-03-16
God bless you and your son :) Have a wonderful day Liz!!
When he grows up and reads this piece, he will realize that this is the best birthday gift he has received today.
LOL,
Amy
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| Happy-tude
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2012-03-16
Interesting and very rhythmic.
LOL,
Amy
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| Brave Tear Drops...
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2012-03-16
Awesome...
LOL,
Amy
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| Being me
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2012-03-15
So Simple and yet so profound...
Enjoyed reading it.
LOL,
Amy
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| Words
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2012-03-14
Words are indeed words...
LOL,
Amy
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| The humble flower of not-knowing
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2012-03-14
Age old wisdom... Now I know how mothers and grandmothers know you are in love even before you do.
LOL,
Amy
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| Nothing there
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2012-03-14
Though it says 'Nothing there' I found an amazing piece of poem.
Simple
Often true
Sad
Beautiful.
LOL,
Amy
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| On a Line by James Wright
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2012-03-07
There is so much in love and your poem put so much more meaning into it. Love it.
LOL,
Amy
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| Vinnen - The Wind
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2012-03-07
Simple and so beautiful... 'So I Fly'
LOL,
Amy
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| The March Of Time
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2012-02-22
Beautiful rhyming scheme...
Wonderful timeless theme...
Stunning writing...
LOL,
Amy
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| Nature's Grace
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2012-02-21
Had a similar feeling while driving on the way to Khardungla Top (Ladakh, India), the highest motorable road in the world. You can see stretches and stretches of desolate beauty and feel you do not belong here and yet somehow you belong by 'Nature's Grace'.
Thanks a lot for sharing.
LOL,
Amy
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