| A walk in the rain
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2010-10-21
brillliant n thoughtful read...loved it..thanx for sharing.
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| Emotional rehab
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2010-05-01
beautiful poem...... its really tough when the people we loved don't respond to our feelings..
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| It feels like your still here
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2010-03-13
ya, you are right, mother is the one who never fails to stand by our side and her absence is always felt..its really sad to lose our mother..lets hope we'll meet her in the new world where there is 'no more pain nor sorrow anymore.'
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| LoVe
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2010-03-08
true and beautiful, love is the only thing that heals our invisible wounds....
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| A REAL MAN
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2010-03-05
one among the best poems I'd ever read...being a man this poem made me feel special and inspired me to correct myself and grow into a real man....thanks.
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| Broken Leaves,Perfect Flower
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2010-03-01
life is an uphill journey, sometime it hurts and sometime it makes us smile, so we need to learn from our life that nothing remains static, if sorrow knocks on our door then we should realise that happiness is not so far....
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| Undying Love
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2010-02-15
love soothes our mind n sets free our darkest fears..love is immortal...indeed.
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| I Miss You!
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2010-02-09
a beautiful piece,true and compassionate...**loved it**
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| Rage
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2010-02-07
Rage is the biggest negative emotion in human, one should always stay away of it..replace it with love and care.
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| Fragrance of Your Heart
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2010-02-07
True love is always compassionate and warm, its always forgiving and missing those beautiful moments is really a bitter sweet experiene ....beautiful piece...
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| It's been a long time...
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2010-01-30
love is sometime an illusion, sometime its a beautiful feeling..beyond words..'m glad that human heart is capable of loving unconditionally...**BEAUTIFUL**
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| Old Man in Sorrow
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2010-01-30
hi zoya, its always a pleasure to read your brilliant writing, you've depicted the sorrow of the old age vividly...only the lucky ones get sorrounded by family always...**LOVED IT**
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| True Love
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2010-01-27
true love always inspires us to do good things...you are right that it never hurt anyone but makes us smile even in hard times.
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| Little sister
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2010-01-27
loving n encouraging...*beautiful*
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| Children of a Lesser God- Bonded Labourers
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2010-01-24
Hi zoya,'m a fan of ur writing...wish I could write brilliantly as u....this poem is a good example of promoting love n care among the most beautiful creature of God... hope the concerned people realize their mistake n stop this inhuman act.
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| The Event of All Time
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2009-12-25
Hi phyllis,its a beautiful poem, birth of our savior is beautifully described,**BRILLIANT**
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| True Humility
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2009-12-07
true humility takes us to the presence of Almighty God....beautiful poem..
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| Insanity's Madness
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2009-10-20
nice one,man is gifted the free will so whatever one choose in life... has to suffer the consequences..good or bad...
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| What is happening?
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2009-08-24
lost in thought....memory always haunt down..some remains life long n some timebeing....but its really a sweet thing in life.
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| OLDYZ
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2009-08-20
hi jalan,it seems u r missing the glorious moment of ur life.however never get disheartened as the saying goes after every long gloomy night there comes a day with the promise of new hope n blissful life...
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| "FREE FREE FREE"
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2009-08-20
hi jalan,nice piece...missing helplessly someone?
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| Love. Trust. Deceit. Lust.
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2009-08-16
very sad and moving piece.....makes one realise the presence of evil in human heart....the last line 'Hope. All that a little girl is left with.' is really brilliant.
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| Once Upon a time
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2009-08-11
enchanting one.....transported me to my past .....and compelled me to think what I lost....
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| I am a woman and there is a universe inside me
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2009-08-11
brilliant ...poem....unfolding the feminine mystry with positive note....thumbs up..
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from Nepal 