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2012-04-07
Thanks for reading . i meant ' lack' . it was wrong spelling
I think now the meaning is clear
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| It Only Takes a Single Heart
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2012-03-24
well written
keep it up
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| Love
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2011-09-30
Language is poor when we try to explain love .
simple and meaningful
keep it up
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| The Heart of life
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2011-09-30
a moment of relaxion what all we need to listen to the nature.
well expressed .i enjoy it
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| Heart's Memory
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2011-09-21
full of emotions ,i really like it.thanks for share it us.
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| The freedom call
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2011-09-19
Thanks all for reading it , and for your nice comments
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| The dawn of understanding
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2011-09-19
very deep lines.i think we all try not to show every thing we feel or think,and that s can make us nnt enjoy it the moments of life or let the others know who we are.
Thanks for sharing it
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| Lost Relations
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2011-02-02
very rich poem, thanks for share it us
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| When I Die, I won't turn to Dust...
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2011-01-28
it's not important where the body ends ,all matter is the soul..
I enjoyed reading,thanks for post it
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| Feel
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2011-01-17
when we bend in out feelings inside , hold them , not giving a chance to feel what we feel , it s really became a burden.
Thanks for share it us
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| I Wish You'd Go Out of My Mind
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2011-01-16
I think ,she is in your heart not your mind ..anyway some said they are one,but using the word mind better than heart because it gives idea of someone takes over u
I like it .keep it up
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| While She Sleeps
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2011-01-16
lovely poem.thanks for share it us
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| Lost, not found
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2011-01-13
losing a part of gaining ,sometimes we lose things in order to gain others.
Thanks for sharing it
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| I'm Here and You're There
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2011-01-12
nice poem.keep it up
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| It's a story within a story¤presSUNpause¤
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2011-01-10
No limit for dreams ,no limit for imagination..your home where your dreams grow.
Thanks for share it us
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| It's a story within a story¤presSUNpause¤
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2011-01-10
No limit for dreams ,no limit for imagination..your home where your dreams grow.
Thanks for share it us
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| THE ROCK THE HARD PLACE THE DEEP BLUE SEA
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2011-01-09
sometimes life put us in delimmas where we have to choose between two hard things , but there is no other way , just to try however cost.
I really like the idea of the poem and the smoth style
thanks for share it us
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| Sleeping tide.
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2011-01-09
very rish poem with mental pictures , i like it . keep it up with that sense
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| Internal bleed.
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2010-12-22
Actually i can't express on how much your writing is clever and intellegent.u are talented.happy to read your poems.iam looking forward to read more.keep it up
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| Every Time My Heart Beats
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2010-12-22
True emotions,nice poem .Thanks for share it us
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| It doesn't get better I am getting better.
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2010-12-18
nice poem , self talk
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| You Broke My Heart to Pieces
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2010-12-10
it touches the heart strings.keep it up
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| Lies
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2010-12-10
i like it especailly the last piece,thanks for share it us
keep writing
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| Thoughtless freedom
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2010-12-10
short piece but very meaningful .i read it many times.well i felt u want to say we should open our minds to thoughts ,then we are going to find the meaning of beauty ,am i right?
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| Meadows of barley.
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2010-12-03
very touchable lines, i really enjoy read them , keep it up
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| The secret garden of the heart
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2010-10-20
I really like the idea of the poem and the images inside it ,interesting poem .thanks for share it us
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| A walk in the rain
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2010-10-18
yeah we are apart of nature,cry as a rain
Thanks for this lovely poem
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| Little Lena (For My Granddaughter)
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2010-10-02
Nice poem
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| Stubborn memories
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2010-10-02
Yes, we pretend that we forgot some memories,may be because they hurt us .but memories always there looking for a moment to breath again.
Well expressed.thanks for share it us
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| let me dream a false dream o my heart!
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2010-10-01
Unforuntaley,happy moments eventually turn to dreams, and gone with time.
Very touchable poem.thanks for share it us
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| Take care
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2010-10-01
Thanks for this poem,full of wise lines and advices as well.
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| This soul
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2010-09-30
Nice lines.keep it up
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| Time
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2010-09-30
I like it. i would like to say it is true that time goes on and so we are , because getting old is a part of moved forward towards another stage which can be more wiser and meaningful. Some people are getting old in their hearts even if they are young in the look.
Thanks for share it us
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| WHEN YOU ACCEPT
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2010-09-29
There is always a part of life , enjoyable one, we do not know when it comes.
be your self. Interesting poem.thanks for share it us
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| Home
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2010-09-25
Homesick ...the feeling that never leave u till u back to ur home where u left all memories and family love.
Nice poem ,thanks for share it us
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| Pain of Evening
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2010-09-23
it 's a pain of moment . nice poem . thanks for share it us
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| Wonder Of Unexpectant[Haiku]
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2010-09-21
Sunshine like a sign of hope
Nice one,i like it
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| The rain's sounds
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2010-09-21
Very romantic .i like it.thanks for share it us
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| Everything
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2010-09-21
Nice poem.Thanks for share it us
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| Demons
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2010-09-21
Definitely without faith and trust any friendship will break at the end.
I enjoy it..keep it up
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| My life is like a sad song
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2010-09-20
never give up to find the hope that light your life again.
Thanks for share it us. keep it up
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| THE UNINVITED GUEST
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2010-09-20
Very cute.Thanks for share it us
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| Crying Purpose?
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2010-09-19
very nice . keep it up
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| ALL A LONE WHILE AMONG MILLIONS
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2010-09-19
sometimes life absorb our power but we have to relaize we are not a lone , just we donot want to strech our hands to other people near by
meaningful poem indeed
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| My Name
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2010-09-19
Our names are who we are ,it's a part of us..without it u feel lost .
Meaningful peom. Thanks for share it us
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| Never what I seem or a poem of relativity
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2010-09-18
wow .it touchs the heart stings . I like the images that you use to express on feelins and moments ,"winter tears,splash of light,the moons relflection"
thanks for share it us
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| love's seeds
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2010-09-18
nice poem , keep it up
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| A frenzy to ignore.
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2010-09-18
I read it more than one time, leads me to think alot how we spend our time. do we really spend it for rest or sometimes we need time to rest from our selves and escape ?..or we just spend it without thinking of it?.
very creative idea you wrote about it
Thanks for share it us.
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| Invisible
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2010-09-17
Very nice poem.i like it
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| My Tree
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2010-09-17
Memeroies always stay never gone if we still remember the one we love
Nice poem ,keep it up
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