| Battle in the Bush
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2015-11-16
Brave write sir, your poem her self worn the battle of bravewrite.
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| Off the Vine
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2015-10-28
Nicely penned nancy... Such words 2Cover with seed, sure the strongest one, that will come 4rm whether 2say 4rm the
Left ~or~ Right part of the Heart. " i guess i will be certain wen u swing one on my left eye :):)"
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| lost
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2015-10-23
very righteous, i think i dont like this line, i love it! "So that I can preserve the memories
before the pain destroys them"
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| Careful
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2015-10-23
Even The Moon Is In Love With This Line, "It was late one night after the evening
Sprinkled diamond dust in nets of blazing
light" I Must Confess The Beauty Of Ur Words Relationship Are Soo Powerfull!
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| My own two feet.
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2015-10-21
I most'nt just come out without eatingwords... I comment this is a cool hell in ur write, see how u gave light to those dirty dark.
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| God Is A Scientist
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2015-09-07
Scientificly penned.... very well he is a science even to imagine his powerful ScienceCration way of DivineCommunicatio to man through the Teledevice called the mind in the silence of our heart...
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| Grief
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2014-12-01
Dark meaning handly penned in hues lightful, great you!, i gleefully enjoy ur usage of beutiful words to tell an ugly felt.
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| Take me all!
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2014-09-15
So real you sound, this penning is so beautiful, lovely and nice...
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| NATURE'S FINEST
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2014-09-15
Wow... Solomon owns u his wisdom, love ur style man....
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| Flame
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2014-09-15
_One day callously
As she works pass me._
Drunked love this line, ure genius about her disregading. Nicely penned.
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| Sugar Like Salt
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2014-09-14
Like pretence to say, i realy feel the u fell, when penning, ur words ar interlectual deep, i like what u meant.
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| A Shadow on the Wall
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2014-09-14
Beautiful penning... You are poetry freak sir.
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| What Did The Minute Hand Say To The Hour Hand?
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2014-08-27
The minute hand sooner than late later hour hand.
So amazing writting, i always enjoy ur sort of haiku, u ave beautiful head for poetry.
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| You pathetic little creature!
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2014-08-23
Stainlesly uve spit out the words, harshly, wholesomely u vomit all words truth against, none reminant to hurt ur heart, flushed pain, left empty space, now u may forgive?
Enjoyed ur dark felt, nicely penned.
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| CONVERSATION
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2014-08-20
Extremely this is a poem to fall in love with, i love every sense you penned in it, enjoyed your CONVERSE.
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| A dream 2 - Grasslands
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2014-08-20
I love the way your words could macarbe a meany mind, its so impressive to read it again times again...nice penning.
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| Fulfilment
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2014-08-13
This poem is full of full..fil..ment,
i love it than i like it. Beautiful words, meaning, i even even imagine the pretty mind of the poem.
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| SHE SAID NO! HE SAID YES! (WITH THANKS TO NABEELA ALTAF)
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2014-08-12
Oh yeah... a legal matrimonial rape, were'ever voiced she sin and he righteously worked for the night job...
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| WORDS CAN COURSE INSTANT ANGER
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2014-08-12
I...Like this penning, your words are well choosed, weigh and justified for the right poem. Thanks and keep writting more.
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| DOWN THE ROAD WE WALK
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2014-08-12
Nicely written, i like it, and will keep liking as we work down the road of bay poetry...
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| Nigger, God?
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2014-08-12
Danger anchored,drunken deadly, hell hard, no nigger's strenght can near an inch to harm God...
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| Among the green
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2014-08-07
Nice penning, perfection is the reword of penning, you wrote so perfect, and am so inspired by your inspiration...
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