| LOOKING IN TO THE MIRROR
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2022-07-06
Another fine poem Ken the truth comes out with your words, older and yet wiser.....plus a good human being to boot....honoured to have you as a Friend
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| SUNDAY MORNING BLUES
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2022-07-04
Really deep and well written, I empathise a lot with your words....one of my loves is playing the blues and singing, usually stream of conciousness words....just wondering if you play or sing ?.....maybe I could try singing your words ....only with your permission of course plus you get full credit as the writer...
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| Goodbye June 2022 by Ann Wood
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2022-07-01
Really like this Ann, short and concise ....you’ve given the Month a good send off.....hope we all have a good July....🙂
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| DOING TIME
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2022-06-03
Very Deep....I have a feeling we are all doing time....
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| DEAD END
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2022-04-06
Powerful heartfelt writing......I know this kind of pain....
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| I STILL FEEL THE RAIN
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2022-04-06
I really empathise with these words.....singing the Blues always helps me.....these words would make a good song...
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| HOW ABOUT THERTY?
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2022-04-05
Yeah Ken a I’ve returned to good news....hope all goes well my Friend....love this one short and to the point...
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| Rain
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2022-04-05
Nicely descriptive.....living in the North of East of England my writing on the subject of rain may not be as.....evocative of the welcome rains......
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| Postcard from the past
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2022-04-02
Economic use of words but they tell the story perfectly
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| Slava Ukraini!
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2022-04-02
Powerful Heartfelt ...we can only watch and yet some do their utmost to help......
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| My Day Thus Far
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2022-01-05
Nicely descriptive......felt like I was walking through the day with you......I think I might have ended up in front of the fire after lunch, and stayed there
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| Happy New Year 2022 by Ann Wood
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2021-12-31
Beautifully written Ann and is bound to strike a chord with many.......All the best for the coming year......keep it full with good words and peace......❤️
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| Reference To Syd
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2021-12-31
Really evokes for me the artist flying to high.........sometimes we forget to come back.......
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| GOOD NEIGHBORS
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2021-10-29
Love it Ken, I can just see the pup....but a big puppy digging his way through to see the other side.....I like the happy ending...all’s well that ends well
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| THE WAR WERE LOST EVEN BEFORE IT BEGAN
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2021-08-23
Short but really makes the point.....we will all be on the front line now.....
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| DADDY KNOWS HIS ONIONS
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2021-08-23
nice one Alan nice ly written and it reads well.....lovely bit of humour makes my day better in every way....lol Alan it always happens when I make comments on here I end up making them rhyme
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| THERE WERE THIS OLD BLOKE
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2021-08-19
Brilliant Ken, the old bloke could be you if you wernt so young, the only book shop Ive been in is since Covid is Asda oh and Tesco......not sure they count but they do sell books and I buy some of my books there......my favourite bookshop is the Charity shop, and I havnt been in one for two years....its a sad world we live in now mate........Anyway Im glad to be back in Poet Bay, its as if Id never been away, and Im wondering why everytime I come here I speak in Rhymes, some of my comments are better than my actual poems
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| WHY TOMMO WENT OFF TO WAR IN AFGHANISTAN (Addid Line)
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2021-08-19
The truth but really sad
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| THE HAIR DRYER SUCKS
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2021-08-19
nice one Alan a few wry smiles as I read through
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| The Future's End
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2018-07-13
Well written ...ps your not walking this road alone there are more than a few of us coming with you....plus we plan on turning the corner and coming back to good times
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| THE PAST! (Addishans!)
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2018-07-03
Well said Ken......
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| In Defiance of Melancholy
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2018-06-21
Having been through the datk, I love the fact that hope triumphs in the end, beautifully written.....words flow like honey
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| BOTH DESCTOP PC AND LAPTOP STUFFDE UP! (BETTER NOW!)
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2018-06-05
ha ha Ken best thing I have read for a long time...you totally summed up up computers, they are great and do anything ......until you need them and then they take over and do what they want lol, brilliant read Ken really loved it the computer I usually use for Poet Bay has given up hence my abscence....now I know this one works Ill make up for lost time....this a perfect poem to illustrate the problems modernpoets face, lol
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| Rain in Dublin
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2018-04-21
Beautifully written the words flow just like the rivers of Old Ireland........
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| WINTER WERE EXSTENDID!
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2018-04-21
Short and sweet Ken...the weather such an important subject for us Brits...good to read you words the Straight onto Summer suits me down to the ground
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| BY ME BEING UP FRONT!
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2018-04-09
well said Ken and extremely well written
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| Indelible
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2018-03-29
Well written and thoughtful...time is indeed a mystery......
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| Lifescape
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2018-03-23
paints an evocative picture.......words conveying imagery
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| Solid Soul Love.
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2018-03-23
gave me a good feeling reading your words........heartfelt.....
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| OH WHAT A VERY DIFARANT DAY!
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2018-03-09
yes Spring has Sprung...still a few heaps of snow up here but the sun is shining....feels good only so many more days to Xmas...lol
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| Broken
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2018-03-08
strong words.....
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| Only the Stars
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2018-03-08
strong message elegantly wriiten
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| the man in the moon (haiku challenge)
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2018-03-05
Beautiful...Ive tried Haiku and cant get the hang of it ...yet...found your work via your Art Work which I really like
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| IT WERE JUST LIKE DISNEY! (A Retuern To A Snapshot Work)((Adishan))
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2018-02-28
Just what I needed to read today Ken surround by Snow.....to dream of Sunlit sky and golden meadows sublime
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| PROPHETS WHO SPOUT WORDS! (Completed - With Addishans)
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2018-02-23
Ken on the News today Kim Kardashian....Tweeted about Snap Chat what she said knocked a billion dollars off the shares of the company.....the power of words in evidence so your correct people in power should think before speaking......although the art of thinking may well be strange to them.....
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| SILENCE AND BLINDNESS! (With Thanks to Thomas DeFreitas Work 'SILANCE')
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2018-02-18
A really fine piece of writing Ken
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| Music Therapy
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2018-02-18
first title to catch my eye...nothing makes me feel as good as music your words convey shared experience
We are only human after all don't put the blame on us or me or you...just let the beat and rhythm set us free...
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| INSPIREING OTHERS!
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2018-02-18
Truth Ken...
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| WHY DO I SIT HEAR TYPING?
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2018-02-18
And we who read are happy that you write
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| Milky Way
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2018-02-16
An elegant description of the dark skies.....makes me wish I could see them..
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| The Swing
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2018-02-15
Enjoyed reading thisone....loved the rythmn Miles Davis and a Girl swinging in the past....a lazy trumpet solo echoing in my mind
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| AS THE POET WALKS!
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2018-02-12
A lot like you and I Ken.....once a reader now a writer as well, thanks to your encouragement
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| Suspended Animation
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2018-02-12
Reading your words gives a real sense of being at one......
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| THE MAJORITY ARE NOW PAYING! (Addishans And Changes)
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2018-02-12
Six lines of truth Ken.....reads really well.....!!!
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| Scenery
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2018-02-09
Concise and to the point....Im trying to get into Haiku, I think Im trying to hard...
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| IN THE YEAR XXXX! (Completed)
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2018-02-09
Strikes a chord Ken....fear is the key, nicely put....paranoia strikes deep, I sometimes feel as though we are being monitored....mention something and your inundated with ads....
Ps signing in was a doddle....😉
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| RAW POETS ROAR! (addishans)
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2017-12-29
Really hits the Mark Ken.....you have unleashed your voice and have now given me space to unleash mine
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| Peace at last
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2017-12-29
Wow powerful words.....everyone hit the target.....
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| POETS AND POETRY!
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2017-12-29
Loved this Ken....it explains the way I write songs, I dont write them I just sing them as I play, my reasoning is that they can never be wrong because they only came into existence when I sang them...so even mistakes are are correct because there are no mistakes....ps will have to get my blue tooth keyboard set up on his ipad its a nightmare typing. ..thanks for he link Ken, I will work my way through your work.....I believe in Synchronicity so when the time is right....the time is right..
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| Today
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2017-12-29
Thank you Thomas and Ken, just exploring, finding my feet, they were there not so long ago dont know where they have gone maybe theyll come back if i write a song.....ps fav poets Spike Milligan, Ivor Cutler Captain Beefheart and Dylan...also haveaLove of Da Da and Surrealism...so might well be exploring some strange places....
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