night soul woman

2018-12-01
Wow!So beautifully expressed energy giving poetic wise words!!!Thank you for this reading experience!

2018-12-01
This one feels like Cthulhu thinks has awaken but is actually dreaming another dream the dream that makes sure Cthulhu will remain at sleep(I 've been reading about Cthulhu those days that's why I thought of Cthulhu while reading your words)

The forest is something that existed before you but your garden is where you can plant more trees & flowers stay there for a while untill those metal monsters finish what they started then if it was me I would take some trees from my garden try to restore the forest to the best of my ability and then encourage others to do the same or ask for their help.

Thank you for sharing and welcome to poetbay!

2018-11-30
Evocative imagery & the undying hope! Well written :) I missed your poetry...

2018-11-18
If the music of freedom can still touch you there is still hope... a poem that leave its mark on the reader. At least we are free when we dream in our sleep. ..

2018-11-18
Oh absolutely!

2018-11-18
Inspired by?:)
Those were the days Or: it was better before...

And shh don't poke the bear you all lol thank you for the reading experience!

2018-11-18
Oh!

Powerful!

2018-11-18
Hihi this poem was like an adventure!Thank you for sharing!

2018-11-18
The sisyphean smile...what a smile! ... and the first I read about it!Well done and thank you for sharing!

2018-11-18
Some are born to be free others need to own something in order to feel free to be what they want to become. Thank you for the reading experience!

2018-11-18
Ah you need to sign the I make things happen contract first lol we need both though adventures and a safe home to return to.That's what I think

2018-11-18
Aw so cute!The last 4 lines made it all better :)

2018-11-18
I love the melody of your words and what they convey!Thank you for sharing the quotes too Indeed it is not as easy as it may initially feel

2018-11-18
How many times in life I went against this silent thought that you describe so well in your poem!No it is not easy but some times we can wait until the time is right...

2018-11-18
Some times the anxious heart want to protect the gentle heart.

2018-11-18
Everything exists inside you and outside you that's what your poignant poem reminded me of!From childhood to adulthood!

2018-11-18
Always a pleasure to read your words. What is life? Love life and you will discover it that's what your poem made me think!I love how you let your words speak to the reader!

2017-10-29
If you were a newbie I would tell you that you can save as drafts unlimited texts without making your presence known
To the rest of us. That would be your choice and everyone (I assume)would silently respect it.

But you know why you are here.

2016-01-05
Hm wait a sec... hihi
Ok now, check this out :D!

Beck and call

born
To mourn

Basically

Feeling reborn
inside her eyes
& every-time she cries:

Hey baby, I hear the blues a-callin'

https://www.youtube.com/watch? v=dQx-H2av1PM

2016-01-03
"When night again awakens
Into day."

It is like someone undressed the night
and then said: get dressed:D

that is just one interpretation of course:)

A very romantic poem regardless what will happen afterwards

2016-01-03
So well captured! I am glad that I get to witness your development as a writer:)! Thank you for sharing

2015-12-21
This was a thought provoking poem! Shall I give you a modern approach to your title? Power? Alt! Who has the control? Hm and if I continue my thought . . .

Power? Alt! Who has the control?

Power needs to alternate
Otherwise it creates
cruel Gods & faithful mistresses

We all need to rest
Why sleep with one eye open?
It's your turn now!



Hm *lol* :) thank you for the inspiration

2015-12-14
Hm today I 've read the following quote and thought of your poem again:D

"lovers should be like pillars of a temple, supporting the same roof, but not too close to each other" Kahlil Gibran

2015-12-13
Like narcissus and echo but in a different setting and because it is the sky and the sea we can understand the why they are apart :) it is because of everything else between them :D! lol

2015-12-13
To know that you can trust, trust yourself is a great source of inner peace and harmony no matter what happens and why. Well done! Thank you for this unique and current reading experience! :)

2015-11-26
Tiiihihi I forgot to log out and in to my account so I can comment your poem:D! I will ask Isabelle to remove the comment when she comes back :D

but yes is still believe that your artwork inspired me to write this comment:

Silence is still golden but it is found inside words on the internet :D ?

2015-11-26
This is a very interesting poem thank you for sharing I will bookmark it and revisit it for sure:)

2015-10-11
Riddles arouse curiosity and bring joy to the creator of riddles because there are so many possible answers.

Your "touchy" title perhaps brings to light that the state of mind one is experiencing after having an orgasm is the perfect state of being that requires no further stimulation eh let's call it(the nipple) the restart button but who wants to say in real life: I don't want to start over? Also orgasm the so called little death can gives a glimpse of what life after death will feel like or life during death? Hm now I start not making sense lol :) I will contemplate in silence about it:) thank you for sharing

2015-08-27
This is very interesting and perhaps eye opening. Let me give it a try and tell me what you think. If that's what you want of course:)

" I love him because he cares."
Someone or some people don't care

"I love him because he's fair."
Someone or some individuals were unfair

"I love him because he's noble and just."
Someone or some humans were not genuine nor just.
To be genuine enough is the only law everything else happens by itself. Justice is to be true to your nature?

"I love him because he's one who we can trust."
You cannot trust humans I do not trust myself either! :D ;)

"I love him because he's always around"
You left me / they left me / I feel alone perhaps separated from the whole and vulnerable?

"I love him because he won't let me down."

People disappointed me

"I love him because he does not lie."

I will believe you if you prove that I can believe you.

"I love him because he eases our pain when we cry."

Crying has a function.

" I love him because he loves me."

I don't like to feel unloved and if you don't love me I hate you as well?

"I love him because he'll let me live in paradise for eternity."

I fear death I cannot make life be better but I can hope for something else while living this life. Become absent. (?)

2015-08-22
Aw so soothing:) - did I read it right? :D

2015-08-18
Aw, thank you for this reading experience! Well written!

2015-08-18
The tetragrammaton יהוה (and in latin letters YHWH)and i english translated as Jehovah.

In exodus 3:14,15 the esoteric definition of God is given but because Moses insisted and God understood that the common people needed a name and not a esoteric definition of the educated ones the name YHWH was given

If we take it backwards: YHWH (exodus 3:15) means I will become what I choose to become another translation is I will prove to be what I prove to be and the most common I am who I am(exodus 3:14)

What that means to me? What God is to each and everyone of us is a PERSONAL experience. Not the same for everyone. What
can someone do in order to praise God's existence is to give to the rest of us their personal experience of God INSTEAD of preaching for things to come like a psychic. What do you think?

2015-08-11
If someone is more intelligent than someone else and younger One cannot expect something better(from let's say a parent) nor is it implied that the older you are the more you should understand and behave accordingly. That's what I have understood in my personal life. The ability to think clearly is what seemingly makes a healthy mind but not by itself. The younger self has needs that need to be expressed, recognized, dealt with and feel satisfied. Get the power back. Be whole again and eager to explore what life has to offer not what that other person that got in your way has to offer you now, that person didn't help you grow as you could why help you now? Am sure you get what I mean and if not don't hesitate, ask me. A intense poem, thank you for sharing.

2015-08-11
When the title is longer than the poem One must learn that titles(in life) don't matter that much;)

2015-07-27
Your poems are like jewels! :)

2015-07-21
Nämen!!! :) Welcome to poetbay! What a surprise to see you here :) Am looking forward to read your new poems in english!

2015-06-12
no no no

Why It Could Not Afford To Be IT

Because It's just not worthY of the true worth of it.

To be IT
To make IT worth the trouble
To keep being IT means to keep fulfilling someone else's imaginary needs instead of being what someone truly needs
It is nice to be it and not IT


;)

2015-06-12
How kind of you to add the corresponding word next to each symbol :)

2015-06-12
Did you check your text after you published it? Some symbols are not visible therefore the story cannot be understood. Also . . .

2015-06-10
touché
tuːˈʃeɪ/

and when U persecutes T?

CUT

2015-06-07
:D

I am sure that some readers can relate with this state of mind:) Have you ever tried to place your hand in the fire and then start saying fuck you to the fire that burns you? It's even more funny because before that the fire kept you warm:) If you feel inspired by my comment you have my permission to write a poem about it:)

2015-06-04
No no no:)

The Bartender takes one look at them and says:
The Leprechaun can stay because it has the gold
I need the unicorn to help me come up with ideas
instead of paying The bagel can only pay for the drinks
by sacrificing itself but who wants to eat a soaked bagel?

2015-06-04
Oh boy well as we us kids write and read these days and who doesn't love already given answers?

What Cult Is The Hardest?

Cult -u(you)-re(are) = Meaning the cult of You aka the other "I"

:p that was a diffi-cult one:)

2015-05-29
Hm can it be that the art of Selfie means You will see me from my point of view?

2015-05-29
Your storm of words and impressions reminded me of this:"But how can a person form an opinion about a subject of which he declares himself ignorant?" Rudolf Steiner

... and is it sad that we accept only what we recognize(what we know)?

Thank you for sharing:)

2015-05-29
:D Thank you for making the start! :) I am going to write about THE invisible (people) but of course I will mention the right now people and forever and ever and always people:D

2015-05-27
Too much and not enough both express dissatisfaction a need for something more or something less but either way each has a specific kind of reality in mind manipulating reality can be a good thing and a bad thing or a chance for introspection.

When I read this:
What has been lost
Long ago
Turns into grief like ☔ rain

It reminded something I am currently try to start writing about. About the right now people the forever and ever people and the Always people:D Oh I dare you can you write a poem about one of them or all of them and what do you think about them or what they can do to your life?

2015-05-22
Indeed some times we forget that... Thank you for sharing!

2015-05-17
A griping reading experience and a well needed journey thank you for allowing us to witness it!

2015-05-17
Being faithful to the already aquired knowledge can be a problem... thank you for your thought awakening words!