| Writing a poem (pen fighting)!
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2006-08-13
AWwww Dan, this was sweet..we have all battled the pen at times, and poured out our hearts to it. Sometimes it yields to us and sometimes, we do struggle..creative! B.
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| Summer Storm
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2006-07-30
Oh my...ohhhhhhh my...sigh...this was inexplicably wonderful! Such a longing, and intensity, as storms and loves can sometimes have..ahh, what a delight to read! Barbie
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| Catch the moment of the day
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2006-07-30
Excellent advice here Dan..we are not promised tomorrow, so we must not let today slide away from us..wonderful way to start my day having this as a reminder! Barbie
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| The chariot of the sun co-write with Kathy Lockhart
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2006-07-30
All I can say is..excellent! This was full of so many good things; peace, longing, raw feelings..I really loved this. Barbie
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| Finally
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2006-07-30
Verrrrry nice job on this! I love the way it was in free form and verse, those are my faves! Splendid job here..and I shall be reading more...Barbie
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| The Charms Of A Woman by M.A.Meddings
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2006-07-30
Oh Mr. Romantic..this was fabulous with a capital F! I too loved that this was more..thoughts...inklings of a young man's mind...greattttttttttt Michael, really enjoyed this...B.
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| My Daughters Wedding by M.A.Meddings
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2006-07-28
Ah Michael, you big nut you! This was funny, sweeeeet, charming, and no matter how you slice it, I could sense your pride, love and devotedness..bless them both, may they live long, happy lives..beautiful..B,.
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| The Summer of Gratitude
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2006-07-27
The thing I feel the most after reading this, is that THIS is what memories are made FOR...chunks of time, we will always keep treasured. Beaultiful, it really was. Barbie
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| Echoes! (a monologue of raving madness)
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2006-07-27
Ohhhhhhhh my dear...this was just a fabulous read! I have worked with many psych patients, and to have a dialouge with them sounds much like this at times...nothing connected, thoughts askew..yes, you nailed it. Barbie
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| Lust by M.A.Meddings a response to the challenge
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2006-07-27
Oh yes..lust is that, and more...nicely done Michael, B.
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| Am a poet on bay
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2006-07-25
May we all continue to write from our hearts, our minds, and encourage each other to pursue whatever our dreams may be,..never, ever give up. Barbie
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| The Pretty People
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2006-07-25
Oh I loved this..the lines about disregarding the bottom layers of the cake, a metaphor? How we disregard those of us who have less..pitiful, and I hope to never be among them. Every soul has value and worth. I found this to be absolutley wonderful in every way. Barbie
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| Diary of a Stolen Heart
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2006-07-25
Ohhhhhh heck...you know, I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry at this, which is why I enjoyed it so much. It is so life like..the phrase a liar in tin foil just sealed the deal..this was A one in my book, Barbie
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