Golden threads

 

 

Four threads of gold

Woven by the life

I hold

 

The two in the middle

spelled out of letters

Inspirationally two for

making a riddle

 

The two at the ends

creating the external angles

Beautiful golden-shining

cornflower-angels

 

Four threads of gold

woven by the life I hold

 

The most beautifully

sparkling of them all

 

~my children~

 

 

 

2007 © Jeanette Louridas



Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2007-03-21 at 23:26

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Amanda K
how i admire those noble feelings from the heart of mom

reaslly wonderful
2007-05-18


betsy Firefly
I just wrote that to Zoya!

Most precious achievment in life is if our children find peace and joy!

Well done!

I think the verb should be 'woven' instead of 'weaved'.
2007-04-11


salem
wonderful text
i like these lines
thanx
2007-03-22


Kathy Lockhart
oh this was beautiful. I had chills reading this. It was a creation of love, by love, and for love. Family
2007-03-22


normalil
I am not into children at all, but I do respect responsible parents. This is lovely, and I hope that your children appreciate it. Regards, normalil.
2007-03-21


normalil
I am not into children at all, but I do respect responsible parents. This is lovely, and I hope that your children appreciate it. Regards, normalil.
2007-03-21