Juuust spitting it out......


Coldness

 

 

Not alone

~ I know I´m not~

But feeling damn lonely

right now

Not knowing

what to do

or how to get through

 

Feeling mostly like cursing

but what good would that do?

 

As soon as you think

everything is going in

the right direction

You can rest assure

that you´ve found 

the fast-lane to hell

 

I´m tired

feeling lonely

Although I do know

I´m not alone

It´s still damn lonely

and cold

From where I stand

 ~guessing~

Not every day

has a happy story

to be told 

 

 

 

2007 © Jeanette Louridas



Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2007-07-19 at 16:37

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
I know the absolute desolation of feeling lonely for someone yet i have her love to keep me going and its beautiful well done a wonderful poem
rgds mike
2007-07-19


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I think we all get those times - a bolt from the blue and it knocks you sideways - a good from the heart poem which I think many of us can relate to

Elle x
2007-07-19


Will
Powerful Penned Expression, Well Written
2007-07-19


Saga
We're always building blocks waiting for someone to knock 'em down, I guess. But once we start building them up again, not only does the building gets stronger but we do as well. As long as you breathe, you are never alone. Although this is not a physical hug, but here a elctronic one from the around the world, just for you!!
2007-07-19