Stan Cooper
anyone who can write so meaningfully can, in no way, be
invisble....

Beautifully written....though kind of sad...but you made your
point....my point would be for you to not fit in...be yourself

xxxx Stan
2007-09-10

ken d williams
This is , a good poem , but: ' when yiuir in a strage land , all is new , like being a child starting a new, with all that was fermiler , pepole yiu know for ages , those you likede , lovde , but also thoseyou did not like , close to hating , but at lesat they were fermiler , you know them , and they know you , the town roads , pavements yiu know , all around yiu were fermiler , now all is strnge to you , lagwige difrant , yoiu wondere if they are talking about you , if so what are they saying , what do they think of me , do I belong , will Iever belong , will I eaver fit in , such thorts when yiu lay in bed , when all is quiet , exsept yiu thourts that are all the louder with nouthing to stop thear nice , that keeps you awake, may be it's best to cry , speck of yiur fears , to some one who understand's , reasure you , as yiu woukld asure the child , fesars are not restrikted to age nor gender.

All the best , Jeanette's , (((((HUGS))) , Ken
2007-09-05

maxmedo
Complaining is bad i know, because all of the time i end complaining to the wrong one, who doesnt care what my problems are. Most of the times when i was in school i was the invisible guy not seen by others, i was used to it, i liked it sooo much that most of my times i complain but to my pen and paper...

~MAX
2007-09-05

Will
Darkness, still written with a lovely flare...

Nicely expressed!!!

Enjoyed the read..
2007-09-05