| Matthew like Lego
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2011-12-09
Gosh, praise indeed! Thank you! Glad you liked it.
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| delish
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2011-10-15
I am so bad, just call me Lady Lucifer ;)
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| Crossing Lines
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2011-07-05
Great write, I particularly love the last part from, "It's over..." to the end. A perfect summation!
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| Her Name Was Faith
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2011-07-05
The parents' worst nightmare. Now I have my own offspring, this means so much. I shall hold her close tonight in honour and lieu of your being able to do it to your own. Shit, I don't know what else to say
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| Heart of the Hunter
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2011-07-05
I love your robust toothsome style in this poem. It makes me want to read more of your work. Which I shall do forthwith!
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| Flickering Life
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2011-07-05
Love this! You're so right; one cannot do anything about a suicide. Suicide's not about anyone other than the person themselves. Just being there until the end is enough.
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| Closer than your breath
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2011-07-05
Love this. Very tender.
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| becoming a mama
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2011-07-05
Ah, cheers, boys!
@countryfog - Yes, supportive and stunned, hmmm, have you met my husband? ;)
@ Rob - You leave my mammories out of this, you cheeky thing!
@ Ferenc - 'What a woman', Well thank you, my love; you don't know the half of it! ;)
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| Greater Love Hath No Woman Than For A Self-Confessed B*stard
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2011-07-04
Wolves are dangerous, wild, seductive. Let's face it, who wants to be with the alternative? A fucking sheep? Methinks not...
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| Five Lines
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2011-07-04
Love the hilarious absurdism.
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| What exactly would you do?
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2011-07-04
Hot stuff. I'd do you just on the strength of this write! ;)
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| Little Girl in the Park
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2011-07-03
I was at the park today with my very own little dandelion grabber. Lovely poem!
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| Once when I'm dead
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2007-09-12
aaah this is so cute! I really love the simplicity of the sentiment, just nice and loving and sweet!
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| OOPS
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2007-09-12
i love that you don't wallow in your pain but rather utilise the poems to exorcise it and pass on aversion of the feeling to others so that they know you a little more
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| Broken Umbrellas
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2007-09-12
loving this b
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| What Do They Need At Their Age?
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2007-07-19
i like the alan benett-ness of this one, bleak but oddly comforting
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| Humantis
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2007-06-20
oui, d'accord
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| TODAY I HAD A GOOD DAY
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2007-06-04
makes me glad
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| WORDS
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2007-06-04
indeed
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| WAITING - IMPATIENCE GROWING
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2007-06-04
there's not much anyone can say to assuage the feelings you are feeling but i can certainly empathise
x
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| THE PERFECT STRANGER - THE PERFECT FRIEND
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2007-05-24
your poems have a very atmospheric quality and this is no exception. i hope to meet that stranger one day, myself!
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| I AM A DYSLEXIAC POET
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2007-05-24
This is fucking hilarious to me, well in part anyway. I am from a particularly dyslexic family and I have howled with laughter at the writings of my dad and my sister on occasions! I'm not dyslexic , myself but I am the one who is charged with checking the others' stuff. I am glad that you are unself-conscious about this, because it's damn funny, poignant and really good writing!
Thanks.
Love,
Rach.x
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| WALK IN THEAR SHOES
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2007-05-24
i admire your work
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| EVER HAD A DREAM THAT BECAME A MEMORY?
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2007-05-24
as much a 'memento mori' as 'anthem for doomed youth'
x
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| she makes him like her
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2007-05-02
this reminds me of a fact i learnt recently about angler fish, after they mate the female absorbs the male into her body and he actually becomes her on a molecular level. art reflects nature, eh? i suppose we are all emotionally canabalistic after a while. either that or you don't stay together.
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| let us be
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2007-04-28
aaaaaaaaaahhh!
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| Hot Blood To Cold Blood.
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2007-04-10
i particularly admire the pithiness of this one
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| The Thirty Years Dirty Doorstep
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2007-04-10
clever
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| A Woman's Rite, A Woman's Right, A Woman's Right.
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2007-04-10
i adore your gratuitous cleverness - very tom stoppard/samuel beckett
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| He Took It Badly – As If She Didn't
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2007-04-10
i like the lack of shcmaltz
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| e-lationship
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2007-04-09
yes, my thoughts entirely, no that I'm making any assumptions on anyone else's part...
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| Ode to an aging GIT !
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2007-04-08
not that we've met yet, i trust mrs lee's judgement implicitly, i'm sure you're exaggerating the truth and are still gorgeous!
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| BASTARDS !
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2007-04-08
totally understanding you here dude!
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| Moonrise
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2007-04-08
i love the pagan elements in this poem it's almost spell like.
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| KEYS
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2006-11-07
Hahaha! that sounds just like me!!! I never remember where i park the car either, i'm always convinced it's been nicked! very well written and very funny!
x
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| Lakeland
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2006-11-07
am laughing my bottom off at this! v. funny - well written!
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| Lunar Enchantment
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2006-11-07
in touch with your lunar side i see!
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| Just a Moment in Time...
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2006-11-07
indeed
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| Ruins of Konarak (poetic erotica carved in stone)
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2006-11-07
wow! you make me want to go there, well writ!
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| Daybreaker–Dan, my friend
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2006-11-07
nice imagery in this one particularly the first verse
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| Sometimes I feel I am the Earth (Zoya / Aliena 'Elements' Challenge- Earth)
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2006-11-07
i like the line about silently bearing up - isn't that the plight of woman?!
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| Harmonising Echoes[Co-write with KJC]
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2006-11-07
that's such a sweet working relationship, well expressed
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| Elisabeth fading, aka I fly a kite for unrequited love
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2006-11-06
quite e e cummings - i like it very much
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| SOS
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2006-11-06
hahaha! nicely done!
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| Poppy
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2006-11-06
ouch that's a sharp reminder of our heritage
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| Haiku for a material girl
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2006-11-06
an excellent haiku!
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| CORRUPTION
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2006-11-05
indeed!
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| The Wintry Crippled
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2006-11-05
an eternal question interestingly posed.
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| Lost
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2006-11-05
this is quite a humbling piece for me.
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| Ouch...!
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2006-11-05
there is a profundity to your work that is so very believable and almost palpable. this is no exception.
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from England