| When I say: 'I Love You!'
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2007-06-30
Hello Zoya
When I say: 'I Love You !'
Beautiful poem, true and tender feelings of pure heart.
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| Restrain
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2007-06-02
Hello
Loneliness, frustration is the cycle of life take is easy.
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| Treasure in the Rocks
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2007-06-02
Hello Zoya
Treasure in the Rocks, expressed the beauty of Himalayas and its
secret arts of ancient time.
Actually I live in Nepal, Nepal is really a beautiful country with full of natural beauty, arts and craft.
Your imagination and creativity even touch and feel the beauty of
Nepal.
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| Promising
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2007-05-29
Hello
Beautiful and touching, blends with aroma of love and promises.
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| Love is an enigma...
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2007-05-26
Hello Zoya
Love is a rainbow
True heart find seven colors
Illusion, three colors
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| Golden Wheat Fields vs Concrete Jungle
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2007-05-17
Hello Zoya
Beautiful poem blends with the aroma of landscape.
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| The Two Wolves Within
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2007-04-29
Hello Zoya
Excellent , The Two Wolves Within 'The one you feed' this poem expressed the motivation of good and bad feelings that occured in every humans life.Good feeling always wins.
With regards
Tsewang Dorjee
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| But, only if...
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2007-04-19
Hello Zoya
But, only If...
Because you expressed word love, care and emotion,
and ready to accept any trouble with smiles.
Drench you in the rain of my love,
And smile in a desert lonely
Hope to see your poetry book soon.
With regards
Tsewang Dorjee
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| The Strength Within
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2007-04-06
Hello Zoya, Your poem The Strength Within, I like this lines
Look for the strength within
yourself, to pull you out
of the ocean bed.
Your poems Is "Excellent and Exclusive"
You are the Star of poetbay without your poems Poetbay is
like a spring season without flowers.
Love and regards
Tsewang Dorjee
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| Ten Thousand Flowers Wilted and Scorched
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2007-04-01
Zoya, Really I respect your feelings and the words you expressed
is very touching,I like this lines very much.
What is this my ink has turned red?
My pen is pouring blood instead!!!
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| Yes, I love you
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2007-03-27
Dear
I feel you on my skin
It doesn't have to be a sin
this two lines, is marvellous and sensetive too.
keep writing I too like Love poems but mine one is something
negative and full of lust.
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| Sing my Verses, Sing my Song/ Remember me when I am gone...
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2007-03-04
Hi
Excellent poem I have no words to praise you
I really enjoy reading your poem Sing my verse, sing my song
Remember me when I am gone.
Like spring flower
Come again to shower
Your tender feeling
And we will remember
Always to you Zoya
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| The Moon and I
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2007-03-02
Hi
Moon and I is beautiful poem loneliness, pain and love
you express is very gentle and touching. and takes
every reader to the moon.
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| Yearning
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2007-02-25
Hi Sonam Bhote
Yes you are true everyone like to hold blue sky in his or her
arm, but one thing you must realize that blue sky covered with
black clouds.
Congratulation to you and your brother Wangdi Gyalpo
First poetry Book Entitled "Bard's Sketch launched on the
Top Of the world Mount Everest.
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| Seashell on the Shore
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2007-02-25
Hi,
An Ocean Haiku, Expresssed untold bliss and sadness
hold inside the seashell, Beautiful and thoughtful haiku
Excellent
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| FIRE
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2007-02-22
Hi
Fire poem really fire my heart,Marvellous, touching and if i say
sexy and full of passion. and ...
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| ''MY LOVE''
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2007-02-20
Hi
Love you shower by your beautiful words and the feelings
you expressed is very touching.
Keep on writing
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| THE DANGER OF ANGER
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2007-02-19
Angry destroyed us, but we have to learn how to controlled the anger? From our enemise we must learn how to control anger,
Because our enemise always try there best to harm us.
But they teach us too, to control our anger.
Somehow there is logic in your poem
Keep on writing
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| THE DANGER OF ANGER
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2007-02-19
angry destroyed us but we have to learn how to controlled the anger, from our enemise we must learn how to control anger,
Because our enemise always try there best to harm us.
But they teach us too to control our anger
Somehow there is logic in your poem
Keep on writing
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| SPECIAL DELIVERY
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2007-02-19
Hi
Love means to sacrifice
I learn from your poem
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| HATE
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2007-02-17
If your beloved one hurts you
think
He loves you too much
Because hating and loving
Is like a dew drop
Sinking and breaking
From spider web.
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| ''My Dear Husband''
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2007-02-17
well expressed the feeling, love at first sight beautiful moment
always young, green and grown in your heart.
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