| "Pri**" (Explicit Content)
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2009-04-02
this is very entertaining :) and i quite agree that though in some way everyones a jerk, some people are just straight up awful :P
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| In the Hands of Fate
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2008-10-24
good explanation of a age old problem, nice job!
joe
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| Chandrayaan –1
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2008-10-24
very inspiring text. seems to point to the unity of many peoples of different parts of society all overjoyed at the wonders of their acomplishments. good write!
joe
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| "My Life"- a college assignment
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2008-09-23
hmm, not bad at all. your poems are always so grand sounding.
best part is the last sentence 'what will i be?'
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| you little deviant
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2008-08-08
reminds me of a certain song, i forget which one.
great job, what is poetry but the outpouring of the feelings in ones mind at that moment
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| Poetry of the Seed
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2008-07-31
I agree, except that also, you could even take the seed as a broader metaphor for the earth..
amazing per usual
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| The troubles of Mugabe (1)
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2008-07-31
quite a powerful poem here. amazing work
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| A Pornstar named Miss Sandra Deven - Limerick
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2008-07-31
wow. such a, interesting limerick.
still quite clever ;)
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| I won't be the same when you're gone
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2007-11-16
And so it is when love becomes the uppermost thought in ones mind.
very well expressed, and very powerful.
peace,
joe
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| Autumn Melancholies
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2007-11-11
You know i live for rainy days in autumn . 'Sweet misery' perhaps is a saying that describes fall well.
nice work again
joe
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| Daisy Chain
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2007-11-06
amazing job here. the words appear not to have much meaning at first, but when you finish reading it, everything makes sense.
keep writing!
peace,
joe
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| I'm not a poet
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2007-11-04
indeed. what is writing but expressing your dreams? by definition one who rites belogs to their dreams.
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| Would You?
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2007-10-24
a very powerful piece of poetry you have here.
Loss is a dull pain, its not like a cut or a blow from a fist, more of a sickness sometimes. this is very well expressed here.
Peace,
joe
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| "I have found the stars now"
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2007-10-24
hmmmm, exellent. exellent indeed. you know, i can almost hear a story song in this. did you write it to music?
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| Angry Feelings
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2007-10-23
and so it is with anger. the problem is that some people hold onto their blindfold, and keep it over their eyes.
good work again :)
peace,
joe
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| The Farther You Step Away...
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2007-10-12
i've already commented on the content, so I shall comment on style.
What i find amazing is that you have your own style of rhyming (or not) that ive never seen elsewhere. In this one is it especially apperent
peace owt,
joe
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| Hipp hurra for me today 10/10
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2007-10-11
when everything goes right life is good.
happy birthday to ya
peace,
joe
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| evening
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2007-10-09
absolutely great visual poem. ic ould see the scene in my head as i was reading it.
nice work!
joe
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| Coffee flavoured lies
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2007-10-06
when somethig is not as it used to be, there is a tangible sadness associated with it. very poignant verse
peace,
joe
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| I'll be there
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2007-09-28
A very beautiful poem you have written here.
i love the part
"I will sit and watch the sunrise with you
When you just can't sleep"
amazing.
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| Fever shake summer buzz full moon intoxication
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2007-09-24
exellent. would work very nice as a song.
i like the moon as a secondhand sun.
peace,
joe
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| covered in sooth
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2007-09-21
Pain of loss is great, wether the loss is momentary or eternal.
Never lose sight of your beliefs, watever they are.
i love the classical form of your poem. very timeless
peace,
joe
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| Secret Admirers
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2007-09-19
some people are no more than favorites, some become so much more.
exellent verse, and i love the rhyming.
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| Mr Pianofingers
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2007-09-16
beautiful. wether a recounting of one interesting night, or an allegory. the poem flows so well even with no rhyme.
i love thefinish: 'Dear watcher' he says without looking up.
'Why are you so lonely?'
peace,
joe
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| Telepathic Taxi
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2007-09-15
exellent. slightly cryptic, semi mysterious. i love the first verse.
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| Sticky Note
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2007-09-12
Exellent and poignant imagery. i love the last line.
sometimes theres not much to say..
peace,
joe
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| In The River
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2007-09-12
Exellent imagery. i think many people find water relaxing.
in fact, i do my best thinking in the shower, oddly enough.
*wish i was in a river..
joe
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| Dichotomy
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2007-09-10
Absolutely exellent. nothing like the sights and sounds of life passing by...
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| A+B, Help+Me!
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2007-09-09
ugg, believe me, i know EXACTLY what you mean. math is for gearheads, gmme a nice book..
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| The Slinky Salamander Story
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2007-09-09
Sometimes i wish i could write as cute things as you do. i dont care if it was written forever ago. the fact remains..
exellent job
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| he or she?
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2007-09-08
simple and yet cryptic. very nice job
joe
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| INSPIRED PIECE (Stay Apart)
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2007-09-05
Ahhh, feelings on paper. Exellent job with this poem. I love the "out of my life but never my heart" part.
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| Promises
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2007-09-02
short and simple, my friend. why bother with excess?
very true statement
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| East,West!
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2007-09-02
Most exellent. I love your sporadic rhyming on here, and totally agree with your point. you excell at these peaceful poems.
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| I Remember.
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2007-08-30
Exellent poem, especially the very last bit. "I've been searching evil,
You're the only thing I can find."
so true sometimes :P
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| I Hear Europe Calling
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2007-08-21
hehe you know me, i would love to go to europe. seems you wrote my thoughts out somehow.
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| Too big too handle
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2007-08-21
oh my. this poem is exactly what ive been feeling like these days. i love the cloud in the sky image. so true.
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| We all know what it feels like
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2007-08-21
Another good poem. Over here in the US these people would be slapped with the label of "emo" and given up on. Hopefully sweden is more tolerant.
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| Zerothirtyone
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2007-08-21
Very nice. And i agree, this would go exellently to music. I like the last verse alot.
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| Dead...(Forevergy)
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2007-08-21
Absobloodylutely amazing. I dont know how you can write such deep musings in a way that is just touching on the understandable. exellent philosophizing. Religion is such a unique thing indeed...
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| the wall in my head, the stone in my heart
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2007-08-10
Reading this struck a chord somewhere inside me. I often feel the same. its as if the closer i get to someone (in any relationship of any kind) , the faster i lose them.
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| Friends or Not?
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2007-08-09
I love it. very simple yet deep point. I can relate..
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| Who Am I?
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2007-08-09
man, you just nailed me here. i mean you just summarized me!
heh, especially your last two lines...we can always hope...
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| Black isn't a colour, no isn't a word.
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2007-08-09
hmm, i can interpret this several ways, mysterious poem! the only thing odd is that i dont see how "dark isnt a color" fits in to the rest of the poem
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| Swan Lake, Madison, and I
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2007-08-09
One of the most beautiful poems i have read. Very, very eloquent, and very peaceful.
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| Truth, reality and realistic truth
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2007-08-08
ever read something you were thinking of at that exact second?
most exellent poem, and so true..
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| [//BiRDS.]
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2007-08-07
Awesome poem. I like the odd rythm and broken feel of the poem.
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