| The Last Farewell!
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2006-08-16
This is beautiful! I always enjoy reading your poems.......they make me realise that nothing Im experiencing can be as bad as I think.....keep writing, you have a great talent!
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| The Cross of Truth
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2006-08-16
This has so much pain and suffering in it.....how can that be possible.........
"Forsaken all my youth,
robbed of my precious worth"
I don't know what to say, Im at a loss for words.........
1 million hugs!
I truly love your poems!
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| Confession.
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2006-04-04
This is so sad....I know how you feel, but believe me, to just close you're heart like that....that's wrong! Think about the way you're able to love, how much you can give...don't close you're heart now! Think of a flower, and the flower is you're heart....the flower is just opening and now you want to close it? Give yourself some time, with time comes closure and with closure comes a certain feeling of belonging.....don't worry....you'll find the one you want and he'll find you!
Otherwise this is a nice poem, flows good!
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| Dear All...
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2006-02-01
Sorry. but this is how i felt some time ago...not gonna do it, don't have the guts....but Im still writing and trying to enjoy life, even if it's hard! Don't worry about me!
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| I found your grief today.
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2006-01-13
Wow! But, I wouldn't want my grief back, I think that deep inside all of us, we want people to feel sorry for us, to help us carry our grief, but unfortunately people don't want to help...
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| Debt for love.
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2005-12-12
I had to read it over and over, so much sadness, I burst into tears at the end, offering himself for her debt.....oh, loss can be so cruel, but you'll become stronger, just hold on!
((HUGS))
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| Questions that kills me
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2005-12-12
So sad! This is true, since Im going through this stage in my life as well, it feels like you are here, but only in body and in being here now, it hurts....good luck for the future, 'cause it takes time to heal!
((HUGS))
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| there's a spider crawling down my spine
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2005-11-27
Beautiful! I am lost for words....makes you wonder what those words are....who the spider is....keeps me thinking....
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| live-in-me
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2005-11-27
I can't help but cry...this is beautiful...but so sad....how can this be?? My favourite lines are
taste my hate
hear my fate
touch my tears
see my fears
so true!
((HUGS))
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| Untitled for now...
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2005-11-27
So much sadness! All your poems seem to be sad...makes you wonder if this world is so wonderful if people hurt so much like you do....
((HUGS))
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| Gone
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2005-11-27
Beautiful! The feeling of being alone and the fact that someone killed you by rejecting you....so much sadness! I'm lost for words!
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| Insane
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2005-11-27
Wow! The feeling of being insane comes across quite good....I like this one very much!
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| Tears Of A Broken Heart
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2005-11-20
Beautiful! How could someone know what is in someone else's heart? How could someone not tell you they love you? Yes, how many questions can you ask and still not have the answers? I like this one very much! Thanks! (hugs)
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| Premature
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2005-11-18
Beautiful! The need to stay hidden from the world, to be in your mother, to be protected from the evil in this world...I love it! I wonder if babies feel like that?? Yes, if you didn't translate the poem, I think that I wouldn't be able to read it! Oops! But then again, if I published something in Afrikaans, I don't think you would know what was going on there either! Hehe! Beautiful still!
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| Emptiness inside
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2005-11-09
I understand your pain, since I've been there and I'm still there, kinda hard to escape...but all in all it's never nice to be alone, we all want someone who can hold us and tell us everything is gonna be fine...
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| You took it all away
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2005-11-08
Yes, it's always hard to lose someone you love, especially if they use that horrible line, "it's not you, it's me"...Whatever! I can't blame men, 'cause some girls do it too...anyway, I like this poem...I felt like it once before...
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| Already Regretting Tomorrow
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2005-11-08
Wow! I don't know what to say, I truly like all of your poems....
((HUGS))
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| Chained
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2005-11-07
Speechless! It's weird how you read someone else's poetry and think I know this, 'cause I know the feeling....life can be so cruel, but in the end you walk away stronger...
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| What is love?
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2005-11-07
Beautiful! This is so true, people say it's better to have loved and lost it, but it never is...my heart goes out to you...
((HUGS))
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| See the sky in flames
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2005-11-07
WOW! There is so much heart in this one, I love it! The structure is adding to the intensity...the words are jumping from the screen attacking me, trying to choke the live out of me...beautiful......
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| your lips speak those pain-inducing words...
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2005-11-07
So much sadness! To love someone and know you can never be with him/her, that's just so cruel...but in the end you can always be friends...it could have been worse...or maybe it couldn't??
((HUGS))
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| You
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2005-11-07
So much sadness...
"I'm so fragile now,"
Aren't we all? The moment you lose your rock in life, you become fragile...
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| Red
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2005-11-07
Phew! I had to read this over and over, so much intensity...if I may say hatred...the feeling I get is that you regret what she did to you, yet you don't regret what you did, even though you hide...something for me to contemplate...
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| Wounds
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2005-11-07
Wonderful! Reflecting what we do to ourselves...so true and yet so sad...why do we hurt ourselves? To know that we are alive? So many questions...
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| Death is calling me, and I don't know how to answer
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2005-11-04
So much sadness! Death the one thing I've come to hate and know like a twin...I don't know how to answer the call either and I can't tell you how to answer....death is part of life, whether we like it or not...
((HUGS))
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| A story that needs to be told
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2005-11-04
Beautiful! This is so true! You find happiness, then you lose it, then you find love and replace it with hate! The story never ends, it just starts over with new players! I like this very much!
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| Numb to yet Another Appeal
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2005-11-04
So much sadness! Yes, humanity is cruel...tell me something I don't know! Im left without words, this poem has cut right through to my heart and opened my sadness! ((HUGS))
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| Remember This
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2005-11-03
The end of the world........yes, some of us can't wait for it to happen, while others don't want it to happen.....hopefully you are right, it's going to be beautiful...don't have much words, I'm speachless once again......
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| Is it worth it?
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2005-11-03
Beautiful! Yes, sometimes to feel love for someone and know that when he/she leaves it's over.....just sad and hard to accept...Sometimes we think we love someone and think that person loves us back, but in the end he/she is just using one...sometimes....
Stunning poem, I like it a lot!
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| Snapshots of my Invisibility
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2005-11-03
So much sadness! I defnitely love the title, that's the reason I chose to read it...what can I say, Im speachless!
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| No More
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2005-11-02
This is my favourite! I think before you can forgive someone, you have to forgive yourself...which is easy to say and much harder to do.....well, good luck with forgiving him!
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| Last Part
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2005-11-02
Beautiful! So much heartache, it's screaming at me from the screen and the will to fight back is so wonderful! Never give up on love, when you least expect it, it will find you!
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| The End
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2005-11-02
Stunning! I enjoyed this very much, almost like a mirror, reflecting my feelings, but in the end, don't give up writing poetry, it's a talent God gave you, don't lose it! True, when we are young we don't care whether we live or die, but as we grow older we want to live, even if it means to hurt each day, to feel pain, to be sad.......that's just how life is, sad to tell you the truth, but we only live once! Enjoy it while you can!
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| LONELINESS
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2005-11-02
Beautiful! I love this one! True, loneliness is one of those things that is all consuming, and if you aren't careful it might consume you...yes, when one is lonely, you don't want others to see it...
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| Forever Never
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2005-10-21
Beautiful! Sad, but wonderful! I know how this feels, as I have this awful feeling everyday...the pain seems to stay with one, even if you think that you have moved on, but there will always be this soft spot in your heart for him....thanks for sharing!! ((Hugs))
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| Last time
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2005-10-21
Sad, but true...try to remember the person with whom you laughed, who shared your joy...I know it's hard, but it's the best medicine! Thanks for sharing!
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| Last time
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2005-10-21
Sad, but true...try to remember the person with whom you laughed, who shared your joy...I know it's hard, but it's the best medicine! Thanks for sharing!
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| SADNESS
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2005-10-21
True, as Amon says, this is about hope....don't we all need that...today more than other days...but oh well....thanks for sharing, this lets me think about the future...
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| SADNESS
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2005-10-21
True, as Amon says, this is about hope....don't we all need that...today more than other days...but oh well....thanks for sharing, this lets me think about the future...
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| Reject myself
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2005-10-19
This is sad!Why would you reject love, everybody needs love, if it's from your parents or from a friend! Sometimes we live in denial, which may cause us to wonder what is real and what is not....but this poem is nice, I felt like this a while back.....takes the words from my mouth!
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| So rare.
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2005-10-19
Beautiful! True, you don't really get someone who cares about others, with this new day and age everything is about "me, me, me". Wonderful poem, I enjoyed it very much!
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| Wonders never cease.
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2005-10-19
Wow! So much anger, but it's so true....it feels like the words are jumping from the screen, trying to attack the reader! Wonderful poem!
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| Leave me broken
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2005-10-18
This is a very sad poem, but I like it very much! Sometimes we wish people would hurt us, just to feel alive...wonder why that is??? Thank you for sharing!
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| Strife
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2005-10-18
Wow! ((Clapping hands)) I don't know what to say, this is such an amazing poem...thank you....I'm speechless!
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| Coming home.
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2005-10-18
Yes, very true....we all have these barriers, scared to let it down, scared to build it....I enjoyed this poem, relates to what I'm feeling today!Thank you!
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| Poem #4
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2005-10-16
Wow! True, one never know what you want or what you have until you lose it, then do you realise what it was that you had....but you can't really wait for that person, not forever that is.....liked the poem very much!
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| Scared To Know
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2005-10-16
Yes, life is hard, everybody wonders what will happen to their loved ones if they should die....the questions, the sadness, everything....I enjoyed your poem, it's sad, but true....Thank you for sharing!
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| Note to you
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2005-10-14
Being left behind is painful, hate the feeling to tell you the truth! Sometimes things just happen, but there's always a reason! Like the poem, very sad, but true!
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| Dirty Little Girl
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2005-10-13
um....sorry....meant to say "So much..."
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| Dirty Little Girl
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2005-10-13
Wow!Some much feeling and sadness in these lines...I guess before you can write something you have to go through it....not a nice feeling.........I truly hope that this didn't happen to you!Beautiful poem in the end, I think the message did come through....Thank you!
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