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2023-06-17
WOW,,beautifully written from the depth of your heart n soul,,i am so very sorry for the loss of your son,he was so very kind and happy i got the chance to chat with him a few times.been long time since i been on poetbay I have missed reading you and poetbay brought us together! love you and miss you ,and will be writing again,,

2017-05-07
oooo la la loved it very much,,so have missed reading your poetry and have missed you so my Mommakac

2015-04-08
And yes life is worth living! I can write from the deepest corner of my soul and write the dark! and I can write about always look on the bright side of LIFE! ;) Yes this is a dark poem, and its a wonderful feeling to write poetry of your deepest darkness and let the light flow,,, ♥♥

2014-01-16
Nothing like the Rhythm between two people,,
love this write,,great beat :) heartbeat more like it,,
take care

CyN

2013-04-04
oopsy typo,,I meant two lines ;)

2013-04-04
Amazing write,I feel the pain in this,especially the first to lines

"My arms reach for heaven"
but my feet are firmly rooted in hell..

to reach from the deepest corners of your soul
to pen on paper,escaping what eats at the core

Loved this write,,take care

Cyn

2013-02-06
beautiful! I could feel every emotion,your love for your son..Its nice to read you again,,havnt been here much,a mothers love,nothing compares,,and awesome,it was I was in the car too,,your vision through poetry,,hugs to you,,and your son is a handsome young man,,proud mom you are~!

CyN :)

2012-09-09
Dont we all have affairs with chocolate,,I am having an affair with Mr Big lol,,loved this write,,take care :)

2012-09-07
lOVED THIS WRITE! we sure can read between the lines on our faces,,if someone read my face,,LOOK OUT! it would be of the Comic,Happy,Horror flicks and alot of HISTORY lol,,

HAPPY HUGADAY!

2012-07-24
I loved the Rythym of this write,,,as the beat goes on :) dig it much,,,,

CyN

2012-07-24
and does it sure grow rapidly:)

loved the write,,,,

CyN

2012-06-20
loved this write,,sun comes and goes,like life itself,,
cheers to you,we sure could use some sunshine on the coast of bc canada lol,,take care:)

2012-06-20
Yes when I look at the sun,I see a glow of warmth that covers our earth letting the flowers bloom as flowers paint the ground in color,,but yes I see the fire,,lets bring out the marshmellows ;) a wee smile for you Thomas,nice seeing you write again,,I would have to put loads of sunscreen on if the earth was on fire,,ha,,take care

CyN

2012-05-22
Yes how our children grow up fast :) beautiful you are and your son..I tried to stop the growing process in my boys,now they are 11 and 9 lol,,and still bring me the best in life :) hugs to you and family

2012-05-17
I love that!!! how about this one,,I don't drink tea,,I drink insanity ;) one for you,,my gf always says that lol,,miss you my friend I need a good session talk with Tea ology :) raise your cup and cheers to Tea - ology! Hmm I might just have to post about insanity ;) haha,,Catch A Happy!

2012-04-25
There are alot of deafins who turn the other ear :)

take care

CyN

2012-04-07
I could hear his voice as he spoke,,the accent,,it was like a photograph in my mind of the mud..soldiers,,,,well written,,accent was great :) funny how we can read a poem or a simple quote as you hear another voice inside your head,,AGAIN LOVED THIS WRITE take care Ken

CyN

2012-03-09
I love how you express emotion here in storm,love this line:

"you will rain until you empty your dark cloud"

Cheers,,,,CyN

2012-02-28
A new house,new beginnings,,,I hope you are staying put on poetbay,,,hugs of many

2012-01-29
I have had many joyful pains with my boys,love this write,,and your son James so darnadorable!!

CyN

2012-01-22
I Intend to read your poetry :)

Intend,a word of many things to do:)
thanks for sharing


CyN

2012-01-22
LIVE and look around,God is everywhere:)
came to me reading your poem,,,
I am dying to live the day I see
the world at peace

thanks for sharing your poem

CyN

2012-01-07
Yes, created by thinking and past and future tells in dreams we see...nice write...take care

2011-09-10
petal of rose,Love this write

2011-09-10
shadow of love,a dark image..but love will bloom once again and love will shine through

Poetry is self therapy and I find when I write is comes from the deepest corner of my soul.poetry is soul searching,dissecting what lies inside,,Keep On Writing

CyN

2011-09-09
words expressed from deep within heart&soul,Love is,what you write on paper,,,to do the impossible,is to be such in love ,lovely to read you Zai

Hugarama!!

CyN

2011-09-03
minds play inside our thoughts,when we dont want to think,,hehe,,,love your write

CyN

2011-09-02
Beautiful,how your poem brings out photographic images in my mind,I could hear the rain,the fragrance of mother earth:)I love the line pregnant with rain! love it..I wrote a poem called Smooth Soothing Melody about the rain,,Nothing like the fragrance of spring or fall rain,inhaling God Aroma Therapy,,lovely to read you always,,,

Cyndi

2011-08-24
The world today needs a Pocket Full Of Sunshine...what this planet needs is world of Peace,Unconditional love between Countries,?We see one world,,,lovely piece ,,sad how the world is changing,,,

CyN

2011-08-24
ohh,lol,, Love the word,will have to pratice,using the word ,,,funny love the write

CyN

2011-08-24
Everything comes naturally when you inhale the fragrance of mother nature,,so beautiful this piece,,,,like a gentle stream through the itty bitty pebbles ,,,hmm just came natural to comment,,love your work,,

CyN

2011-08-20
Love it! short and to the showers upon us on a hot summer day,,,,lovely to see you

cyn

2011-08-06
Thinking,we all do that, sit beside a stranger,,say hi,,maybe a small chat,but in silence we think,of the other person,what thoughts are unrolling in their head....we smile,say have a good day.Thinking,never do we ever stop!;)nice write!

CyN

2011-06-15
You took the words write out of my mouth!!beautifully written!

2011-06-06
beautiful words written...we all ask ourselves in questions,its a gift to reconize our faults and achievements in life..In life their will always be unanswered questions..Desire creates power within us all,I believe,,,,Lovely to see you sweetfriend

Cyndi

2011-06-04
ahh,how we all have had struggle mumbles in our head;)
The words you present on paper is a great Um diddle diddle diddle um diddle eh;) dont ask after I read your poem i wanted to write that lol!!Iam struggling as we speak to present you with a comment lol!loved it!

2011-04-12
beautifully written with your grace,always love reading your elegance in what you write from your heart and soul,what oozies from your mind ;) nice to see you

cyndi;)

2011-04-06
We all understand,we all have storms within but clouds clear and blue skies and love remains!! a very well soul searching poem!!! Keep on babe

2011-02-07
beautiful and moving..with every word written..Iam very impressed baby!!!

love u

2011-01-24
I felt this deeply and my grey skies are the bluest of blues since you walked into my darkness and shone the light on who I am as a person!today!! awesome write!!

2011-01-24
aww babe that is so DEE do da funa! love it,,I cant believe I missed it! love u,,later

2010-10-31
isnt that the truth!!!love it much!!

2010-09-02
I love a good soul burger with extra tarter sauce!!;)great write from the truest of heart!!

2010-08-31
Demons!!pfft!!I will rip em from your mind and toss em to heaven!where they can get a halo!!lol a very powerful write and I understand completely,,,;)

2010-08-31
thanku for showing me what love is all about..you have captured my heart and noone can ever take that from us,Love is a gift,dont matter if your gay straight ,,if you respect and love one another! there is no need for anyone to judge! of who to love!respect honor cherish,.,,,u are the best gift and blessed I found you.Thanku for opening my heart to see who I am,what I stand for,and blessed u captured my heart and soul

love u

2010-08-31
at times only way to express,is from poetry,when at times cant express verbally,beautiful poem and I know who ever you are writing too,LOVES YOU TOO;)

BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSION! u are

CyN

2010-08-30
sometimes pasthistory of events,that brought pain and heartache,makes u a stronger person...I hated that expression,but its true..events that happened,at times almost killed me but I took a hold of who I am as a person and learned coping skills,My heart to fear past, present and future combination;)but takes a true spirit,who will mend a broken heart and bring to attention their is love out there,!this poem,I understand completely

welcome to the bay!! ;)

cyndi

2010-08-19
Beatiful,loving words from the heart,and hope who you wrote this for,reads this..keep on writing,and again words speak volumes when at times cant express verbally,,take care

cyndi :)

2010-08-19
Life is dot 2 dot :) this did make me think and smile! cause you wanted too,Life is all about causes :)happy summer day!welcome to the Bay :)

2010-07-10
Forever he is in our hearts for a lifetime,his poetry was uplifting,breathtaking and how his expressions for his love was
like a gentle stream:) lovely to keep is work alive!!!

kisses to you Lastroman!in heaven where u beam upon everyone who loved you!!

cyndimac