| So Long (III)
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2008-11-11
so gooood! so saaddd!
and I like the style! :DD
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| A BIG Jerkasaurous
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2008-11-11
jerkasaurus= greatest insult ever
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| My heart belongs to you
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2006-09-17
aww don't scratch yourself out of the game! Go for it (like me friends tell me :D) This is a very good poem!! I like how you use the italicized words as well as the normal font! It sort of grabs you also with the spacing differences :D
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| My Hypothesis
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2006-09-17
alkefdkf vleinv.. teeheeheeeeeeeeeheheeee
ahem I like it!!! ;D
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| Shwoa
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2006-05-30
i definetly need to take your advice :D
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| The Satin Demon
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2006-05-30
aaaaaaa i can never look at satin the same way again!! awesome poem though :D
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| Just Friends
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2006-05-30
aaaaa he's a creep!!! but yeah i know how you feel *wink wink nudge nudge*
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| Its Fine
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2006-03-18
i kinda like names... even if i do make some up :D nice poem
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| Tea
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2006-03-13
mmm irish breakfast tea.... well you may have a knife but i've got five incredibly sharp arrows and a bow! :P :D incredibly good
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| Down and OUT _ >flat<
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2006-03-13
ahaha i wing it all the time :D great!
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| Diffrent?
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2006-03-13
well you can always go into acting :D shweet poem :D
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| This Is You.
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2006-03-07
hope you're not talking about me :D hahaha... but who are you talking about that most of us don't know..... hmmmm.... awesomely awesome and heck yeah it deserves a bookmark!!! i luuve the faces!! :D
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| Memories
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2006-03-01
i cherish my memories :D very good!!
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| Letting Go
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2006-02-27
awwww... i hate letting go.. so i usually don't but yeah sometimes you have to.. very good poem though!! :D
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| The World
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2006-02-26
very true! i like this one! welcome to the bay!
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| Dolphins
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2006-02-26
yay dolphins!! very good depiction of the life dolphins lead.. in short brilliant! :D
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| A shadow
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2006-02-26
i never thought of shadows as mocking just (very) close friends this puts them in a totally new perspective excellant!
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| The Hunter
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2006-02-26
yeesh! yet awesome! :D
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| The sunlight of children
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2006-02-26
awww haha very good!!
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| Who needs thoughts like these...
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2006-02-26
well i guess i'm doomed to fail at life anyway so i'll pay attention to this WONDERFULLY RANDOM yet completely focused poem
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| My Life's Tapestry
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2006-02-25
i'll patch you!! i've got... wait let me find them... hold on... anyway while i search for more patches my conscious half will say that this is very good!!! very very very awesomely good!! soo good i misspelled very the first time and almost before i deleted it!! that didn't make much sense but it was an awesome poem! :D... i'm tired :D
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| Marked For Disappointment
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2006-02-24
i don't think i expect anything from you.. do I? hmmmm gah making me second guess myself!... not that i don't do that on a regular basis it's usually more of contradicting than doubting anyway very nice!..... i'm not disappointed in you if it helps! i'm very proud of you in fact!.. for what would be i guess that you tolerate me! ahahahaha.... most of the time :D
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| Last Moments
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2006-02-24
gah! you thought of that in like five seconds?!?! not fair!!!
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| Ripples Of Life
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2006-02-24
hey i have a wild imagination and i'm not a total child! still a very good poem!
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| Love
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2006-02-18
i agree with poeticpro.. yeah.. you are always damn right ahaha quoting curses with compliments.. anyway it is very good and exquisitely (word of day as of right now till when i am done writing this) depicts(ahaha) a beautiful picture of love.. in short term bloody brilliant :D
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| Run Away
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2006-02-18
i want to fly!! anyway it was very interestingly good.. hmm... makes you wonder..
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| THOUGHTS
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2006-02-15
very good.. don't know why you didn't write something sooner they're all really good.. sadly i can't ignore grammatic mistakes all the time but it was good anyway! :D
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| Next?
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2006-02-15
hmm.. maybe..
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| Whats Your Worth?
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2006-02-13
sometimes i wonder if you're insane... no good hah! it was extremely good!
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| Numb
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2006-02-10
yay! that was really good.. ahh soo many people to make me feel like a horrid writer it's not fair! anyway, that was really good but i also agree with the other guy that there is sometimes a sense of safety in that numbness but i'd rather know than not..hmmm thought provoking i guess!:D
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| No-Thought Syndrome
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2006-02-10
oh god have i had the no-thought syndrome for the past like year...ugh.. however it seems to have not affected you in anyway. Great poem!
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| Overlooked
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2006-02-07
i think of you and you are loved!! though i like to be on my own a lot too. especially when you guys tease me... jeez... oh well... i'll dance with you if you want me to! repeat with sing.. :D
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| Time
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2006-02-03
well she took all the good stuff to say so i'll just back it up with "that was really cool!" kinda pathetic but true! and i'm ready to defent that post if need be! :P :D
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| Best days of your life
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2006-02-03
wow.... and no i don't think you're an irresponsible commitment-dodging ignoramus.... well at least not the ignoramus part. :D
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| Mirror, mirror
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2006-02-02
ahahaha.. i love little red riding hood!
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| Enchant
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2006-02-01
wow, i feel really inferior now
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| The Music of the Beach
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2006-02-01
WONDROUS! clau...... i mean /poeticprocrastination/ (i assume those mean italic but not sure) already took my word so that'll have to stand weakly in the presence of such a masterful (ha-ha!) piece of art!
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| The End
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2006-02-01
good god! that was brilliant!!
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