| You, Me and the Rain
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2010-02-12
you explain this so well, i could almost see you and feel the emotions
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| Hearts quicken, then they sicken, then they fail
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2008-11-14
wow this is beautifully written and so true. I thought i was the only one scarred by the wounds of love
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| IN ALL UNSPOKEN WORDS ABOVE
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2008-11-14
Oh my!! Now why doesnt someone write that to me. So beautiful and intimate and affectionate
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| The Nightmare In The Shadows
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2008-10-21
as long as you breath dear, its never too late
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| The right price
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2008-10-03
well, you have a way of capturing the essence of the poem or thought so completely and then expressing it beautifully.
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| Flames of Melancholy (II)
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2008-10-03
what can i say, words cannot express the depth of feeling released by this piece of poetic work
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| Bereft
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2008-10-03
i agree with Zoya, there is something captivating about your poetry
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| Flames of melancholy
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2008-10-03
wow, this is really a good read, very well written, captures that feeling completely. I cant help but feel pity and a little sad for the bloke in the poem
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| Have you ever seen a smuggle...
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2008-10-03
well this is a very nice poem, very light hearted and uplifting in a humourous way
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| This is just getting a litte ridiculous
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2008-10-02
my life feels like that at times too, nowadays even the sleep isnt as fulfilling as it used to be...very well written. i love it
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| Her favourite colours
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2008-09-29
Oh gosh!! This is so sad, she really should leave and i truly hope that its for good.
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| A Pantun
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2008-09-29
I understand this feeling so intensely.
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| Toot Sweet
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2008-09-29
Ha ha, well thats just funny.
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| In Those Arms
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2008-09-29
Oh i totally agree, i'm wishing that right now. If only life was so simple we would all be so much happier
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| Children of a Lesser God- Bonded Labourers
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2008-09-26
Hey, hope you're well
I dont think any words can express how touching this is...
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| Styx and Stones
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2008-09-26
this is a beautiful piece. I'm sorry for your loss.
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| All or None
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2006-04-29
Oh! I feel this poem. i recently wrote one about loving with reserve!!! Doesn't make sense!!!
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| Make Una Kill Dat Monkey
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2006-04-28
So hard to believe that stilll happens. In my life havent really experieced it coz i live in Africa.
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| I won't Be BEHAVED;-)
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2006-03-24
congrats dear I'll definately pray for you.
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| 8th of March (An Introspection)
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2006-03-10
Oh my dear, this is very touching and does make one reflective on what they have done or could do to help stop it.
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| Beware not to tell the truth!
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2006-03-04
I read your poem and i must say that i think theres a lot more to the situation than you express. the media aren't innocent either you know!! Its unrealistic to expect the government to do nothing though i think what they did was too drastic.
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| Hard times of self-made srife
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2006-03-04
I must agree, this is really wonderful and we're all glad to know that you are ready to move on no matter what you have to face.
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| Purple hearts
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2006-03-04
Wow you really put it very well
"they have found a new home
in a jar on the shelf
and to be frank
they prefer it that way"
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| Hot Desert Sands (A Nightmare)
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2006-02-28
Oh dear, that is one frightening fear. But you know that can never happen there are far too many people that care about you.
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| Hot Desert Sands (A Nightmare)
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2006-02-28
Oh dear, that is one frightening fear. But you know that can never happen there are far too many people that care about you.
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| The pleasure of desire
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2006-02-22
Oh! Oooh!! Oooooh!
You just took me to another time and place and filled me with longing.
Very well written indeed!
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| Moral ground
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2006-02-22
It feels like a betrayal of your own soul and creates a helplessness and despair for the hope that true love actually exists.
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| Just a thought
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2006-02-22
Wow this is really nice.
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| That is my dream.
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2006-02-15
Sent a shiver down my spine. Thank God it was only a dream.
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| The Warrior of Romance, II
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2006-02-15
Wow Rik should read this. I love the way you have reconciled the falling of the knight .
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| Thinking of you
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2006-02-15
Sounds familiar. I've actually written a few poems on same theme. Glad to know i'm not alone though i wonder when it ends.
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| Cry, my beloved country!
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2006-02-15
Wow! magnificent depiction of those who bite the hand that feeds them. Would instill partriotism even in a dead heart.
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| BAD VALENTINE
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2006-02-15
That not only sucks but is cruel as well. No one deserves that on such a day.
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| The warrior of romance
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2006-02-15
Absolutely breathtaking and fabulous.
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| Enchantment of the first kiss (Valentine Special)
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2006-02-15
This is a beautiful piece and extremely well written. I am enchanted.
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| ...Love Doctor...
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2006-02-08
Worry not deary, i'm the doctor
fix you right up, check you all over
but perhaps as my word is final
A cold shower will do.
Completely agree with angie. Humorous piece
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| ...Sometimes I feel I am the wick...(to Zoya, my candle)...
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2006-02-08
I must admit your talent is massive. the way you wrote this piece is exquisite and captures the essence of the wick in totality revealing a love that runs deep.
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| The Hundred Years of Solitude
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2006-02-07
I completely agree.
"But it is a pit less abyss,
I still crave for you" the irony of the human spirit
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| My baby
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2006-02-07
Oh what a bright way to sugar coat it. Gave me a hearty laugh
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| Addicted(To Poetbay)
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2006-02-06
Sounds like a loud echo from the depths of my soul for barely did i join and indeed was addicted too. Very well written and expressed.
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| I MISS YOU
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2006-02-06
I agree how sad it is that we realise the value of people to us when they are gone. Truly heartfelt poem.
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| I CANNOT
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2006-02-06
I cannot explain what it is
but your poem rings true
life has its many mysteries
Of unanswered what ifs
Conflicts of the present
And longing for the unknown.
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| Sex
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2006-02-02
Quite right who does
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| Untouched lands
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2006-01-30
Truly a pity. Very well written indeed.
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| when winter did its comeback
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2006-01-30
So much pain
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| The Pacific Bay
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2006-01-30
Isn't it just irony, the beauty of the sea and its destructive capacity on the hand
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| Procrastination-(Journey to the Sun)
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2006-01-30
Don't i just understand it. Thats life i guess.
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| My Dying Bride
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2006-01-30
Rather sad if true but well written
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from Kenya 