Kel

2006-11-12
absolutely beautiful... i know the feeling ^^

2006-10-29
simple, yet striking... i know the feeling :)

2006-10-14
i'm close to tears reading this poem... i actually think that this IS how my bf thinks about things whenever he thinks of this long distance rel'ship that we're on... great expression.

2006-10-14
love at first sight... i'm a believer ... luv the poem *

2006-09-03
THIS is love.

2006-08-15
LUV IT...captured very eloquently, and sweetly writing...nice :)

2006-08-05
i luv this poem...and yet at the same time, i find it so ironic that your words reflect how i feel inside :( i'm in the same situation, and the reality of my boyfriend leaving me is a hard reality to grasp...but through your words, i can see that there is some hope in the midst of this kind of situation between two lovers ^_^ great write !! i always love your work :)

2006-07-22
NOOO!!! why are you going ??? *tear//sigh* i'm going to miss your words so much, they are so inspiring to me .... good luck in life :) i'll miss your kind words and comments ... but no matter what, keep writing !!! :)

2006-07-02
this poem is really beautiful, i'm definitely bookmarking this one :) and i can relate to everything that you have expressed through your words... being in love is an amazing thing :)

2006-06-30
i like this one...i don't know why, but i do...lol...it could be the way you expressed yourself in it...

2006-06-27
yup i definitely like this poem..words can be so beautiful at times,and others, its the one thing that can make a person go from feeling bad to worse ... i really like this one :)

2006-06-27
omgh manda i LOVE it :) :) this is you to a tee :D hehe ... and its dam long ... lolz ... i like this one ... // excellent :D ...

2006-06-26
this is ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY BEAUTIFUL !!!!! I LOVE IT !!!! lol and i really can't get over the emotions that play out in this poem ... well done to both poets ... love is a beautiful thing, i believe it more and more everyday ...

2006-06-26
this poem is absolutely beautiful :) and i can relate to this so well ... excellent write :)

2006-06-26
i really like the simplicity of this one ... you outdid yourself this time hehe...a beautiful reflection of a statement so hard to say to someone, and to mean it with all their heart...

2006-06-25
such a powerful statement coming out from this work...luv it.

2006-06-24
simply mind blowing ...

2006-06-24
" But I think it's too late:
we both have found someone else that is a

Fool to Love. "

i love this one. very dramatic ending, the way you expressed yourself in this one i can relate to... you are truly talented in your words :) keep writing

2006-06-21
i really like this one...and you're asking a question which i myself have been thinking about recently...is it possible to find 'love' when you're young ? but what is love?? there is no age limit to love...but at the same time, how can you be sure that the person is who you want to be with for the rest of your life? personally, i think that love is a commitment, and it comes about when 2 ppl have mutual respect and trust for one another...but when it comes at such a young age, ppl think that its just an infatuation or something of the sort...ways this poem really does leave a poignant question in anyone's mind...and i love it, btw :) lol keep writing

2006-06-20
THIS one i REALLY like....and i can most definitely relate to what you have written..from my experience anyway, lol ... you have captured the feelings that i experienced when i first went out with a guy that i liked...isn't it a wonderful feeling ? :)

2006-06-20
this poem, is just incredible...yes i do detect a resemblance in writing between you and i lol...i guess our feelings on this topic we call love are expressed in a similiar fashion...keep it up ! :)

2006-06-19
this poem is just flawless. i love the way you have written this, it says everything that we know the phrase ' i love you' means ... well done. i am speechless.

2006-06-05
this is flawless in every way* .. excellent write.

2006-06-05
i LOVE the title of this poem :O ... its absolutely breathtaking,and it definitely caught my eye...the poem has an delayed, soothing characteristic about it,and i like the fact that you make it draw out ... 'a dip in your soul...' well done.

2006-06-05
i like i like...interesting twist you took on this one, and i like the last lines of the poem
"Therefore I will be stuck watching you,
not watching back..."
luv it !

2006-06-04
this is just beautiful...i really like it :) well done

2006-05-31
i really like this poem just because of its simplicity....its short, and sweet, and i think that it touches a small part of what we feel whenever we're looking at someone, doesn't matter who, and that split second anatomy of 'butterflies' that we get...i really like this poem.

2006-05-31
the poem is really beautiful :) it captures the moment of a first kiss to a tee...i love it

2006-05-31
this poem is pretty impressive...i remember when i used to write like that...gothic/dark poems about life and the oppression that we face...i like this one though, really felt the emotions that were coming through in it...i like your style*

2006-05-29
i like this one manda :) its short and pretty .. lol keep trying out all those different poetry techniques...at least you're making use of what us literature ppl in HNC are supposed to know about ... btw that sestina was really kool :D lol ttyl

2006-05-29
this poem is absolutely heart wrenching :( and beautiful all at the same time :) .... i love the title 'beslan angel 186' ... remembering those who died in that horrible incident :( R.I.P...)) well done shastri :P

2006-05-25
de nouveau, j'adore ton poeme :) c'est tres beau...je pense que tu as un cadeau pour l'expression a traves des mots...tres bien !

2006-05-24
this poem is so short...but it has so much truth in it, and it speaks of one thing : WHERE IS GOD IN OUR WORLD TODAY ?!?!?

2006-05-24
you wouldn't believe just how powerful this piece is .. one of my friends would love you to death if she read this poem...you pro Africa people are really amazing in your struggle for the continent ! and i admire it greatly ... keep writing ... we need young people like you to keep up the fight !!

2006-05-24
j'aime ton poeme :) c'est petit, mais a la fois c'est tres forte, ton langue est simple et efficace. *mais, je dois savoir, ou vous habitez? et tu as quelqu'un poems que tu as ecrit en francais ? moi, j'ai habite dans le caraibe ... et je voudrais aimer a lire autres pieces en francais :) ... ciao *

2006-05-16
the passion in this poem is incredibly haunting .. you're so talented !! i wish i could write poetry like you

2006-05-16
this poem is really beautiful... capturing the essence of doubt and confusion that any girl goes through in a point in her life ... i luv it :)

2006-05-08
hey manda...yet another really great poem :) and i think it captures the way we see God as a 'young adult' .. lol nah but seriously there are moments where i can most definitely relate to you in this one ... keep writing :D

2006-05-07
jed you rele have to admire those ppl who can rhyme every sentence :| lol hey what's up hasani ? hehe manda showed me this site :) its pretty kool ... ANYWAY .. lol yea your poem is rele good :D and it definitely has a lot of emotions cropping up ... you have rele great expression with your words :) yay .. lol ttyl_

2006-05-07
OMGH manda this poem is incredible :O you really impressed me here lol :) ... its amazing, i luv it ( you know i luv all ur poetry hehe) and well its jus rele dam good :)

2006-05-07
this poem is really beautiful...touches the delicate aspect of love in a fragile manner...well written...everyone and anyone who's ever been in love can relate...