MiVidaDeEpílogos.

2008-05-21
love. this.
it feels safe. and reminds me of perfect weather, and lazing under the shade of a big tree, and your favourite person ever, with you, in peaceful, no words needed, silence.
love.

2008-04-20
this makes me feel all warm and cute inside :)

2008-04-19
pretty.
stylistic, yet uncontained at the same time.
it looks like a visual representation of some type of grief, perhaps.
instability.
the rhyme scheme is very neat. (not as in 'cool' but as in 'tidy; organized'.)
it made me sad.

2008-02-27
this disturbs me.

2008-02-26
p.s., since there wasn't enough space in the introduction.
i'm officially NOT ready to talk about this, yet.

2007-03-26
1. i like the car motif lately. it's really different, coming from you, but i like what you are doing with it.
2. i like the haiku suite idea! ;]

2007-03-26
i like this a lot. i like its assertiveness.

2007-03-26
i think the fact that i've just read and analyzed "to kill a mockingbird" makes me read this differently.

2007-03-26
i can't believe you wrote something new and it's not really new anymore and i never saw it.

as always, this is gorgeous. i will probably have to re-read it a few times. but at the moment i am too excited about your other new texts.

2007-01-07
well, used to love ACTIVELY. plus, the syllables had to be right.

2006-12-28
okay so i read this and then i read it again and then i read it again and then i read it again and then i died a lot.

because it is so alksjf;lajf;lskjf;ljfdas.

so now i have to read it again.

2006-09-18
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2006-09-17
Aw.

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2006-09-17
Mmmm.

SOUNDS PRETTY FUCKING GOOD TO ME.

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2006-09-11
I like the soft rhythm to this. And the super-duper awesome cryptic title.

2006-09-04
Feliz cupleanos. (I always misspell that.)

I don't even have to tell you I love this because you're psychic so.

<3

2006-09-03
Aw I love it.

I get points AND bonus points because I'm just that cool. =]

2006-08-27
So pretty and peaceful.

Best ever:
it's kind of funny, how he never realized the sand was beautiful until he could see every crystalline grain.

I don't know exactly why that is best ever. It just is.

2006-08-04
Oh, I love sonnets.

This is really beautiful. The gentle longing... perfect diction to fit the mood.

2006-07-26
Oh, I loved reading about your family. I am also an aunt (though not a great-aunt yet as I'm only 15!) and I have two nephews (age 6 and 2) and a niece (age 3). It's always very special to spend time with them. I am their only aunt from their mother's side; they have two on their dad's that are almost as old as their parents. They like me best because I get the least time with them, so I'm not constantly babysitting them and telling them to stop doing that or to sit down... we just play.

I am so glad that you have a large, healthy family that you have shared with us.

2006-07-18
Arrr I love haikus.

Nice imagery.

2006-07-12
What's this? Two new ones tonight? God, I envy you. While I was getting absolutely tortured by a pair of nine-year-olds and their rabid dog, you were here writing beautiful poetry...

I love all of these, but especially the second and third one. Most especially the third one. It made me stop and go "omgwtffuckinggodIwantGermanyandfallingasleeponbusesstaringintohiseyesandsmellinghimontheblankethelentmeandwakingupwithhishandsinmyhairandhiswhisperinmyearalskhskdjha'ioflsh;lak'flokihsdkljah;dkjfh;dsagsdagfa."

I miss everything, do you know?

2006-07-11
Wow. Deep. Dramatic.

Good stuff.

2006-07-10
I like this. It is so much of a strange cross between a song, an epic poem [think: Homer], and an almost lullaby/children's rhyme sort of deal.

I'm not really sure how to describe what exactly makes me like it, but I like it.

And and and mosttttt especially I love:
His heart held love like oceans
Oh dear.

2006-06-22
I love this a lot. There is such a gentle yet marked transition illustrated perfectly... I especially love

her parents at home
where they belonged
as she danced until midnight

it's right there. The marked change. You've captured it so beautifully.

I like how lately you've been seeming to find yourself between your childhood and your adulthood. I never really dwelled so much... sometimes I regret that I didn't. But, whether or not you regret anything, it makes for quite simply perfect poetry.

2006-06-14
Wow.

God.

This just....

floored me.

Wow.

2006-06-11
Sad in a hopeful sort of way.

I hope your beach trip this summer can fix things. Or at least I hope it doesn't make it hurt more.

2006-06-06
At first I thought you meant "jarred." But then I realized that Jared is a boy's name.

This is really sad. As per your norm. But so beautiful all at the same time.

2006-06-04
It's honestly nothing to be sorry about.

2006-05-28
Sad.

2006-05-23
I have been depressed all day.

2006-05-21
I have to tell you that the title is basically... genious. Which I always misspell. I suspect I've misspelled it here, but I don't care too much.

It sounds beautiful and painful all at the same time. Much like every aspect of life. If you actually live.

2006-05-17
Mm. I always rather preferred sunset when the sky is painted excricuatingly beautiful. Twilight is the giving up of that fight.

Then again, pitch-black night isn't bad, either.

2006-05-15
Yeah. But you were dreaming anyway.

Won't live for 35.

2006-05-15
"i don't believe that anyone feels the way
i feel about you
now,"
said her radio.