| Yellow Fruit [Haiku]
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2009-04-15
This is sweet! anyway you write ups are always impressive.
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| Are you my angel from heaven?
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2008-12-11
What a beautiful poem with lovely rhythm. Thanks for sharing.
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| 1st Impression
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2008-12-11
A wonderful poem, beautiful rhymes and good imagery. i loved it.
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| Young sprouts
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2008-12-11
Nice piece,am sure it has another meaning hidden beneath the lines.
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| Apology
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2008-12-11
I love the way you started the poem, is a nice poem quite emotional.
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| Stars in My Sky
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2008-12-11
This is a wonderful poem, can't believe am just going through this lovely poem. You really expressed the beauty of nature, is touchy too.
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| Cinders Missing the Ball(sonnet)
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2008-12-11
I like this poem, it got some hidden message between the lines.
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| HALF FULL OR HALF EMPTY
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2008-01-02
This is a beautiful work. i find myself asking similar questions too. what is love? it makes some people happy and others sad, i have fallen in love and cried out of it, keep the ink flowing you are good.
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| I GOTTA SMILE AND CRY
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2008-01-02
This is emotional but interesting, i like it. keep the ink flowing.
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| Sink
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2008-01-02
i kinda like this poem, the love is so strong you never want to part.
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| Take Another Look
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2007-07-31
This is a great write, your lines have deep meaning, i did learn from it, and thanks for including me as a writing friend.
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| Ignition Of Us, Our Bond, Our Love[Happy Anniversary Thomas]
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2007-04-19
aah! this is cute.
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| I do not Ask/All I Really Need [Is Your Love.]
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2007-04-19
This is very beautiful and emotional, i think we guys need to read this. It is well written, i really miss reading your works.
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| Give me tears
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2006-11-03
This is sad, i really dont know what is hurting you that makes you want to cry, i just hope is not that bad, and try talking to someone before you hurt yourself.
take care.
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| Love Explosion
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2006-11-02
This is a lovely poem, with woderful rhymes. when your friend reads it she would be glad she has you as a friend.
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| Can't help but shed a tear.
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2006-10-31
This was well written, i love it.
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| To Tell or not tell [of one's heart's desire]
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2006-10-31
hi, this is really emotional and lovely, i ve once being in the same situation and i lost the girl. but on the other hand is always good your express your feelings so you dont regret later in future. do what your heart tells you to do.
cheers.
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| A Romance In Rhyme
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2006-10-26
Hi,
this is lovely,with beautiful rhymes.
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| One Scary Tale ~Halloween/Fall Challenge~
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2006-10-19
Nice, i liked this pretty scary!
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| Kentucky Woman (Hero's love poem challenge)
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2006-10-11
This is beautiful, keep up the good write.
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| Valley of Fire ~Part 1~
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2006-10-06
you got talent
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| I can feel
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2006-10-05
This is deep,
Nice work
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| The Power of Suggestion
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2006-10-05
I believe you here, your words are powerful, thats why is good to say positive things.
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| You can't fake a beautiful day
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2006-10-05
nature is really beautiful, i could just picture myself on a beach,
Excellence
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| I love you so much
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2006-10-04
this is emotional and intersting.
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| Hugs
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2006-09-29
so sweet, and it flowed beautifully.
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| A Love
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2006-09-27
this is beautiful, she really must be gorgeous!
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from Namibia 